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| Kavitha garu baga raserandi.
me migilana kavitalu kooda baga vunnai.
Posted by: Mr. Surya At: 11, Dec 2003 7:23:23 AM IST
Nice expressions kavita.. good poem.. hoping more from your pen.. keep it up.
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 8, Nov 2003 9:52:12 AM IST
amma lEni pillalu unDaru kadaa..ammaku, amma prEmaku dooramaina pasipaapalaku...
ammalandarikii amma manasu vunTE enta baagunTundi?
THANK YOU ALL :))
REGARDS
Posted by: KAVITHA At: 7, Nov 2003 11:49:32 AM IST
Wanted to read this again.
paradoxically, today i liked the poem more than the dedication.
Now i feel, the dedicatiopn might have been more great if u remove that words, "MOTHERLESS". it may make such kids remember that t hey have no mother. Anaadhanau anaadha ante enta baadhestundo kada.
u never say , Motherless kids to such kids, ok???hope u understand.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 7, Nov 2003 10:49:21 AM IST
chaalaa baagundi andi Tel#
Posted by: Mr. Narasim Kasaru At: 7, Nov 2003 6:31:07 AM IST
Dedication is appreciated.but not kavita..kavitha
Posted by: harsitha harsitha32001 At: 6, Nov 2003 10:08:01 PM IST
kavitha, kavitha baavundi. keep posting.
Posted by: Narendra Pratap Raju At: 6, Nov 2003 7:11:39 PM IST
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very moved with the DEDICATION than the actual poem.
Hope u will really treat motherless kids with such love.
If every woman is so afectionate about others' kids, there might not be any orphans in this world. Great spirit, never lose it
SORRY I POSTED THOSE COMMENTS IN MY ALTERNATE PROFILE, WHICH I DELETED JUST NOW.
Posted by: Viplove K At: 6, Nov 2003 4:33:19 PM IST
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