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Articles: Poetry | | baalyam | |
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| Shresta garu,
Chala baga reserandi...
me ee balayam kavitalo..
padalu sarigga vunnai..
okaa kavita ina chalada anipinchettu vunnai
Idi chadivana taruvata migata meeru rasina kavitalu chadavalanipinchi chadevenu. kani antaga nachha ledu ..Meru telugu lo rayandi baga vuntundi..
Posted by: Mr. Surya At: 9, Dec 2003 6:18:55 AM IST
Afraid to look back , but u made me see a dream. thank u
Posted by: Viplove K At: 21, Nov 2003 3:48:16 PM IST
beautiful....shresta...chala bagundi....the way u narrated is very expressive of ur own feelings and the main theme what u r saying about.....
keep posting
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 15, Nov 2003 1:13:35 AM IST
chali vekuva tholi jaamulo
kumpati mundu duppatilo koorukupoyi koochunte
pooja gadilo deepam
puvvulu temmani bayataki tarimedi..
woowwwww.. shresta.. Its beautiful
kampisthunna kanneella parvathaannaipothaanu..
you are excellent.. its a great piece of work
Posted by: Narendra Pratap Raju At: 14, Nov 2003 6:25:46 PM IST
Thanks you all for your precious comments. 'Childhood' is that part of life that has so many rememberances for each one us. E badhyatalu..inhibitions vundavu. I wish, I could get back to that time..Precious moments are always..hard to get back.:)
Once again thanks to you all.
Shresta.
Posted by: Ms. Shresta Ms At: 14, Nov 2003 6:16:12 PM IST
like it ..
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 14, Nov 2003 4:49:20 PM IST
wonderful.. chaala andanga undi.. simple words lo baaga chepparu.. esp punching lines at the end.. "balyaniki kalam pattadu .. balyasmrutulaku kaala dosham pattadu"...
Keep going .. good luck :)
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 14, Nov 2003 12:36:11 PM IST
whoaaa...beautiful :)
Posted by: Saleem At: 14, Nov 2003 11:34:26 AM IST
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