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Articles: Poetry | | Sparsha | |
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| Naveen garu, Wonderful. Very good poem. But your poem can give raise to controversy. I am not the one to participate in it.
Really you expressed the true emotions of love. Simply superb. You seem to be very romantic too. Yes, it should be.But I may contradict with you in one aspect. Sparsha avasarame, kaanee adi anduku baata vese, aamoda mudra telipe, pavitra maangalya bandham tarvaate baaguntundemo ani naa abhipraayam.
Ika gaggolu sangathi,pelli antoo jarigina tarvaata evaroo gaggolu pettarane naa uddesyam.
Kya mohabbat mein milnaa jaroori hai, haan, iske sivaa o adhoori hai.(ghoongat ki aad se dil bhar kaa song). Nijame. kaani aa premani pandinchukoni, peddalni oppinchukunte , vivaha bandhamto yekamaitene baavuntundi.
alaa kaaka kevalam iddaru premikulu ayinanta maatraana, vaallu sangaminchavacchu ante, samaajaaniki koodaa cherupe kadaa! aalochinchandi. daanne kadaa manam paaschaatya samskruti ani vyatirekistunnaamu.
Nijame upaadhyaayulu koodaa "Parvatee Tapassu" explain cheyadaaniki sankochistaaru. idi mana samskrutilo sex gurinchi unde vidhi nishedhaala valla. Peddalaki, Pillalaki unde gap valla. nijamgaa ilaanti vishayaalu manam mana close friends to, adi same sex to maatrame discuss cheyagalame kaanee, in fact opposite sex to ilaanti vishayaalu matlaadagalamaa?
Same ide concept "Sex Education" avasaramaa, vaddaa ane issue ki sambandhinchindi.
Mee kavitalo, modatidi Peddala or Samajapu abhyantaram gurinchi. I contradict with your view in this regard.
Second one, the inhibitions we and our society and our elders have about Sex.
Anyway as far as the poem, wordings and expression is concerned, really it is very beautiful.
meeru raase prati kavita chadavaali anipistundi.
Keep going, Sir.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 17, Sep 2002 9:29:06 AM IST
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