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Articles: Poetry | | maLLee modaTikochchiMdi | |
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| chaalaa baagundi mee kavita subramaNyam gaaru
Posted by: Mrs. Aruna At: 5, Jan 2004 12:40:22 PM IST
Thank u all.
Kishore : i too tried finishing it in a +ve way but it didn't fit in, that's why i left it like that.
anyway thank u for the suggestion.
Shareef: kavi eppuDU tana anubhavaalE raastaaDanukuMTE porapaaTu.
This is a common feeling that every human being has i suppose.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 4, Jan 2004 9:48:39 PM IST
very good.
and true
Posted by: Viplove K At: 4, Jan 2004 6:54:05 PM IST
Hi, This is kishore.
A nice poem and good expressions. I did'nt gave any coments till today. But u'r poem make me feel. so i am giving my first coment to u only.
You r correct. But i thing it is better to express in a positive way. Like an optimist. Try to extend some lines and end the poem with a positive attitude or with a solution. ok? mail me u'r feelings.
my mail ID is :
panangipalli_kishore@hotmail.com
Bye and all the best.
Keep Writing.
But with +ve thoughts.
Posted by: Mr. Panangipalli Venkata Satya Krishna Kishorre Kishore At: 4, Jan 2004 6:31:50 PM IST
eekanienaa baddakaanni veedandi
-smd_shareef@yahoo.com
Posted by: Mr. SHAREEF SMD At: 4, Jan 2004 5:32:43 PM IST
chaaaaaala bagundi me kavitha,chala correct ga rasaru common man ela alochistado
Posted by: Miss yamini kumari valavala At: 4, Jan 2004 3:00:42 PM IST
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