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| Sneham maanava naijam. idhee nijam.
Posted by: Miss meenakshivichakshanaone meenakshivichakshanaone At: 6, Oct 2004 12:26:20 PM IST
kaadEdi kavitakanarham balli,pilli,nalli
nice,viplove
Posted by: Dr. kiran kumar n At: 27, Feb 2004 10:04:45 PM IST
:)
Posted by: Mr. Nava Cherukuri At: 21, Jan 2004 10:00:08 PM IST
Chaala baagundi viplove. ending lo malli manam maamulu manushulame ani cheppina vidhanam inka baagundi.. good one.
Keep it up buddy.:)
~Sreedhar
Posted by: Sreedhar G At: 21, Jan 2004 1:09:54 AM IST
Viplove....first nundi last varaku manchi flow lo vundhi...chala bagundhi...second stanza chala bagundhi.........last line conclusion gaa correct gaa kudirindhi.....very nice.....
keep goin.....manchi meaningful idea
TulasiMohan
Posted by: Mrs. Lakshmi Tulasi Ramineni At: 20, Jan 2004 11:22:18 PM IST
mee article chala bagundandi.
Posted by: Ms. kusumalatha k.v.n At: 20, Jan 2004 9:16:35 PM IST
Excellant!
'gIta' lO cheppinadi gurtuku vastundi.
'vaanChalanu gUrchi sadaa mananamu chEyuvaaniki ( anagaa aSaaSvatamulaina vaaTini gUrchi eppuDU alOchana chEyuchU, vaaTiyandu kOrika kaluguvaaniki), vaaniyandu anuraagamu adhikamai, adi kaamamu gaa maari chivaraku krOdhamagunu. krOdhamu valana avivEkamu kalugunu. dInivalana jnaapaka Sakti naSinchi, daani phalitamugaa manujuDu buddini kOlpOyi chivaraku adhOgati chendunu.'
aaSa, kOrika ivi santOshaanni entagaa istaayO..baadhani kUDaa anta kannaa reTTimpunistaayi...vITini adhigaminchaDam saamaanya maanavulaki saadhyam kaani panEmO?
Posted by: Rishi At: 20, Jan 2004 9:05:45 PM IST
wow...
nice one viplov.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 20, Jan 2004 12:39:55 PM IST
manal&ni manaM abhimAniMchukOvaDaM, mana snEhAnni, prEmani manapai manaM chUpiMchukOvaDaM chAlA avasaraM.
ika eduTivAri nuMchi snEhAnnO, prEmanO ASiMchaDaM prati vyaktikI sahajamE. aMdulO tappEmI lEdu. kAkapOtE mana snEhAnni kAnI,
prEmani kAnI eduTivALLu yAksepT chEyalEnappuDu kUDA manaM chaliMchakUDadu. bAdhapaDakUDadu. idi koMcheM kashTamainA, alavarchukuMTE eMtO AnaMdaM labhistuMdi.
dInnEnEmO bahuSA DiTAch& meMT aMTAru.
idi nEnu nA anubhavAla dwArA nErchu(telusu)kunna satyaM.
kavita chAlA bAguMdi.
Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 20, Jan 2004 12:25:46 PM IST
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