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JAI-BABA Subbarao vimonisha place loe undatamantey appudu atanu ammaiga alochinchu tadu gani magavani mansththwamundadukada-Oppukuntundi- pelli jaruguthundi-Bhowthikamga success -naithikamga failure ee prema vivaham.Para sthri vyamoham malli vijrumbhinchananthavaraku vari jeevitham anandamayamey.

Posted by: Mr dyvadhinam yaddanapudi At: 13, Dec 2002 4:09:55 AM IST

Hello raji gaaru Naa comment kadha kanna peddadi ga unnanduku i am sorry..i just wanted to express my views thats all... Thanks venu Ryali

Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 14, Nov 2002 3:22:41 PM IST

Elaanti kadhalu vinnam,choosaam kaakapothey rachayitha veru amthey!Emdulo kothhadanam yemi ledu.Eka e kadha mugimpu ki vosthey edi only oka cinema gaano,leka kadha gaano chooskodaaniki maatramey e mugimpu applicable.Reality lo E mugimpu kadha ki sukhantham yemo kaani..vaari vivaaha jeevithaaniku maatram kaadu! E kadha prakaram modati numdi kooda kavi gaaru SUBBARAO attitude manchidi anna vishyam yekkada manalni convince cheyyaleka poyaaru.Amtey subbarao attitude ammayila pichhi annttlugaa project chesaaru kaani athanu PELLI kosam thanaki nachhina ammayi ni vetukkuney prayatnam lo unnadu anna mentality ni yekkada choopinchaleka poyaaru.So basically Subbarao di vayasu prabhavamey kaaney Manasu prabhavam kaadu ani roodi ayipoyimdi. Enko vichitramemitamtey Manchi chathuratha gala ammayi gaa VIMO ni project chesaaru.Telivi gala ye ammayi koodaa avathala manaishi character meeda doubt unnappudu...tanakbund ki athanitho omtari gaa velli thanamthata thaaney LOVE vishyaanni bayataki theesku raadaaniki prayatnimchadu.Thanu nijamgaa kavi gaaru cheppinattlugaa Telivi kaladi ayithey Subbarao aa vishyam gurimchi maatladithey appudu SUBBARAO ni thanu point-out cheyya galigeylaa umdaali.So ekkada naaku ardhamaina vishyam yemitamtey ekkada kadha lopam ayinaaa jarugumdaali leka Vimo ki kooda yedo oka moola oka rakamaina aakarshana umtey thappa thanathata thaanu LOVE matter ni theesku raadu.Oka person amtey manchi abhipraayam lenappudu asalu athanitho omtariga velladam oka thappu.Thananthata thaanu LOVE vishyam thevadam enko thappu. Maro vichitra vishayam kavi gaaru remdu paragraph la tho "ASALU SUBBARAO MEEDA YETUVAMTI MAMCHI ABHIPRAYAM LENI VIMO character chetha PELLI ki oppincheyyadam"(So VIMO chaala DUMB ayinaa ayi umdaali leka SUBRAO pedda maatakaari ayinaa ayyumdaali(ofcourse subrao maatakaari ani maatram kavi gaaru project chesaaru!). basically naa comment SUBRAO,VIMO la characters gurimchi maatramey.okavela General gaa maatladaalamtey ... Ye manishi thappu kaadu.yevari abhipraayaalu vaallaki umtaayi.Manishi yeppudoo okeylaa umdadu.maarpu sahajam,subbarao thana experiences valla thanathata thaanu nijamgaaney maari umdavochhu(but kadhaa lopam yemitamtey e maarpu ni clear ga ekkada choopaledu).alaagey VIMO dynamic lady ayyumdochhu..amtey Subbarao yelaanti vaadainaa subrao ni maarchukuney telivithetalu thanaki unnai anna nammakam vumdochhu.So manishi nijamgaa maaraadaa leydaa anedi yevari individuality vaallki telusthumdey kaani...e kadha mugimpey amdarikii avuthumdani anukovadam moorkhatwam avuthumdi. Subbarao laamti ammayilu yenthamandi leru?yentha mandi moga vaallu nijamaina prema ni kolpoledu?alaagey yentha mandi VIMO laanti vaallu e society lo bali kaaledu?Marriages are made in HEAVEN annaru kaani...Kaapuraalu matuku Bhoomi meedey kadaa jarigedi?amdukey moga,aada eddaru akarshanalaki,balaheenathalaki lonu kaakumdaa saadhyamainantha varaku telivi ga umtey chaala samasyalu ni nirmoolimchochhu.mana society lo moga vaaridey pai cheyi anna dhoranilo kontha varaku maarpu chaala varaku vochhimdi.enkaa raavaali.Subbarao chedu thirugullu thirigaadu amtey thappu Subbarao di maatramey kaadu Lakshmi prashanthi gaaru!!aa thappu subrao tho thirigina vaaridi kooda.ye? vaari telivithetalu yemayyayi?Avakasam dorikithey yevarainaa DURMAARGULEY..amdukey bhagavamthunni yemi prardhimchu kovalamtey alaanti avakaasalu naaku raanivvaku bhagavamthudaa ani!So ekkada oka ammayino,oka abbayino vimarsimchakkarledu manam.purrey ko buddi,jeehwa ko ruchi laagaa e kadha lo only subrao,vimo la buddi ni battey manam maatlaadaali kaani prasanthi gaaru MOGAVAARU amtey RAAKSHASUlu annavidham gaa comment cheyyatam badha gaa umdi. For example Subbarao ammayi latho thirigey typey anukumdaam kaasepu,avakaasam vosthey thananu nammi thirigey ammayilatho saariraka sambandhaalu pettukuney manishey anukumdaam... ekkada oka vishyam yemitamtey LOVE ani chesukuney saariraka sambandhaalu eddaru estapadi cheskunevi so only subbarao ni maatramey thappu pattakoodadu manam.So eddaridi thappu umdi amdulo.Moga vaarini manam thappu pattalsimdi only "RAPE" vishyam loney yemdukamtey adi aadavaari estaaniki vyatirekam gaa jarigedi.Amthey kaani MOGA vaadu aadadaanni maatallo dimpaadu...mosam chesaadu evanni TRASH.edi kevalam aadavaari amayakatwam mariyu telivi thetalu lekapovadam ledaa athi telivithetalu umdadam... Eka Prema lo mosa povadam vishyam vosthey thappu yevaridii amtey ekkada kooda Eddaridee aney cheppali.Sincere ga preminchukuni Fail ayunavaallu unnaru...elaantappudu thappu PRemadi kaadu ..aa premani chigurimpa chesina kaalaanidi.Amdukey final ga nenu cheppeydemitamtey yedaina decision theesko boyemundu alochimchaali...theeskunnaka alochimcha koodadu cheyseyyali..daani Result yedainaa kaani daanni yedurkuney Dammundaali,daanni manam anukuney vidhamgaa maluchukuney prayatnam chesey Telivithetalu umdaali..lekapothey Premainaaa amthey YEDAINAA "AMTHEY".(AMTHEY = END) But e kadhanika prakaram 1)subrao character manchidi kaadu (ekkada character manchidi kaadu ani yenduku annanu amtey...athanu ammayilatho thiriginanduku kaadu kaani vaarini friends ga treat cheyyakumdaa vaarini PREMA,PELLI ani ammayilalo aasa lu repi chivariki thappukovadam valla athani character bad. 2)Vimo andamiandemo kaani telivi vunnadi kaadu deeni vivarana already paina echhesaanu so eka mugimpu correctaa??amtey... characters project chesina prakaram matuku thappey...VIMO subrao ki manchi class peeki vodileyyalsimdi...subrao amthaku mumdu ammayilaki chesina anyayam gurthochheylaa malachaalsimdi.Chivariki mugimpu elaa umdadam valla VIMO ki emthaku mumdu SUBRAO tho thirigina ammayilakii theda yemi ledu.VIMO lo speciality yemi ledu...Speciality amthaa SUBRAO loney umdi VIMO ni kooda trap cheyyagalgadam.... veeri pelli jarigithey definate gaa veeri kompa kolleyrey!!!yemduku chivarilo kavi gaarey JOKE laaga umtumdani .... krindi vidham gaa wraasaaru kadaa... ************************************************************ Okarojuna bedroom lo relax ga vunna Dr. Subbarao ki coffee isthu ' mee patha prema partners eppudayina , akkadayina kanipinchara doctor?' ani Nimonisha navvuthu adigindi. Dr.Subbarao coffee thaguthune kasiga 'ada caselu chusedi thamarega doctro? varini edo oka rojuna thamare kani petti nannu pilisthe andaram kalsi saradaga coffee thragudam' annadu dhuma dhuma laduthuu. -----------the end----------------------- ' mee patha prema partners eppudayina , akkadayina kanipinchara doctor?' ani Nimonisha navvuthu adigindi" ani wraasaaru... nijaaniki navvuthoo adiginaaa nija jeevitham lo e anumanam anedi subrao meeda life long thongi choosthooney umtumdi.... that means...veeri jeevitham lo Nammakam saatham thakkuva...Anumaanam Saatham yekkuva. So final gaa kavi gaa smadesam yedi evva leka poyaaru...yedo Teenage prema kadhalu laagey mugimchaaru kaani MEDICINE chaduvukunna vaalla kadha laagaa ledu... character Mentalities ni sarigga project cheyyaledu...kadha ki oka nirdhista disa ledu..Vachanam meeda concentrate chessarey kaani RACHANA meeda kuduru kanipimchaledu... Mugimpu e saari samdesaatmakam gaa umtey baagumtumdi..yemudkamtey bayata schools lo college lo jarigeyvey ekkada choopisthey eppatikey Cinema la prabhavam valla,TV la valla mana janaalu amdakumdaa pothunnaru..dabbu kosam college,school love story lu,meturity leni vayasu lo premalatho dabbu damdukuni yedagani MANASU la VAYASULA tho aadukumtunnaru.eka websites meeda kooda edey theeru ayithey bhagavamthudey NEXT GENERATION ni kaapaadaali thanks & Bye VENU RYALI Nenu correctey ani naaku anipimchadam sahajam.Meeremantaaru RAJI gaaru and others?

Posted by: Mr. Venu Gopal Ryali At: 14, Nov 2002 3:15:08 PM IST

hi raji garu, bagundi me story.okey debbaku rendu pitttalu laga first short lo fake love ni kottaru ,rendo shot lo politicas ni kottaru.mee thinking ki first na hatesoff. then inka subbarao visyam lo vimo alochana vidanam marindi antey adi subbarao adrustam.mari antha manditho tirigina subrao ni vimo accpet chesindi antey adi adavari balahinatha.adey sthanam lo magavadu vuntey he never accepts.bcoz adi maga vadi ahankaram. Anyhow vimo visyam lo tanani preminchey vadini pelli chesukundi kabatti surega valla samsaram happy ga saguddi.bcoz ikkada yevaru yetuvanti force cheyaledu kada. then inka prema visyani kosthey adi tappey.kani abbayilu preminchi batapadataru.kani manam oka manchi vastuvuni choosamu anukondi adi kavali ,pondali ani tapanpadtam.so abbayilula ammayi kuda yedo oka kshanam lo yevaro okarini istapadtundi.so naku telisinanthavaraku pelli anedi ok understanding.nijamyina couples pelli ayina kotthalo kantey kalam gadichey koddi okarinokaru yekkuva ardham chesukoni premisnhukuntaru. So anyhow mee stroy ki happy ending icharu.i appreciate u. sreeni

Posted by: Mr. M.S.Reddy At: 3, Oct 2002 1:26:55 PM IST

Nissandehamgaa, Nissamsayamgaa jaragadu. Khachitamgaa happy gaa undaru. May be, Vimo ni sooti poti maatalato baadhistoo, sadistic happiness, Sub. pondutaadu. Success or Failure ki evari definitions vaallavi. yendukante konta mandiki "Long Standing" kaavaali society kosam(manasulo ishtam unnaa lekapoyinaa), konta mandi "Standards" korukuntaaru. avi lekapoyaaka, kalisi unnaa "Love" ledu just "Marriage" ani feel avutaaru. Ika Sub. samardhimpe kaani dennainaa manam accept cheyagalamaa? naa valla haani jaragaledu ante, physical gaa proceed ayi, kadupo,kaalo vastene haani annattaa. Love ki sambandhinchi maamoolu vaallaku koodaa tender feelings untaayi. mari aa feelings ni wound cheyadam sababaa? adi nashtam kaadaa? Magavaallu aadavaallani blame chestaaru kaani, "friendship" antaaru ani, nijaaniki veelle aa okka maataa cheppaledu kaabatti memu "Love" cheyaledu antaaru. kaani expressions, words annee premistunnattu indirect gaa untaayi. Dabbu kosam aadavaallu tirugutaaru anadam yenta haasyaaspadam? Anduke ilaanti manastatvaalato chaalaa jaagrattagaa undaali. mana basic character meede yenta easy gaa nindalu vestaaru choodandi. Rash gaa samaadhaanam ivvaali anipiste, "Dowry" istunnaaru kaabatti teesukuntunnaamu ane vaallaki, meeru kharchu pedtunnaaru kaabatti pettinchukuntunnaaru anachchu. kaani manasu oppadu. yeduti vaallu neechulainanta maatraana, manam koodaa ade vidhamgaa react avuthe, vaallaku manaku tedaa yemiti? Vichitram yemitante, Doctors, IAS lu ilaanti prestigious and serving sector kosam chadive vaallaku koodaa ilaanti buddhulu undadame. Mosam cheyadame paramaavadhi ayithe evaru maatram yemi cheyagalaru? Vichitram yemitante ilaanti yenni kathalu repeat ayinaa(khachitamgaa avutoone untaayi), Vimonishalaki takkuva undadu. akkuna cherchukuntaaru. kaani ee Sub. chetilo mosapoyina vaallu maatram ontarigaa migili povaalsinde. oka vela yevarinainaa chesukunnaa, Sub. ni yemi anani vaallu, sonta friends koodaa, ee ammaayini comment chestaaru, vere vaallani chesukundandi. Very Hard Reality. A bitter truth. Vaalla manasulu maaraavu, mana manasulu maaravu. This cycle will goes on.

Posted by: Ms. Prasanthi Uppalapati At: 2, Oct 2002 6:32:12 PM IST

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