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Articles: Short Stories | Valentine's Day
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Feb 14th, Valentine's day
andaroo eduruchoostunna time raanae vachchindi.
tana pakkana amaayakamgaa nidura pOtunna sunnitanu melligaa laepaaDu Saekhar. 'Happy Valentine's day,dear' nuduTi pai chumbistu wish chaesaaDu. 'Thank u and wish u the same dear. I love you' atanni vaaTaesukunToo badulu ichchindi sunnita
ivvaLaa kooDa aTuvanTi rOjae. maarindi maatram samvatsaram. renDaeLLa kritam tana pakkannae unDindi sunnita. ivvaaLa laedu. appaTi nunDi Valentine's day anTae endukO tanaku ishTam laedu. chinna manaspardha. vaaLLa jeevitaalanu maarchaesindi. pani chaesae aaDavaaLLaku aham unTundi ani tana vaadana. 'naaku undaa?' ani sunnita javaabu. 'ala aDagaDam lO nee abhipraayan?' eduru praSna. chiliki chiliki gaali vaana ayinaTTu, iddari parihaasam vaaLLa
jeevitaala lO apahaasyam ayyindi. gataanni gurtu techchukOvaDam lO artham laedu ani anukunnaaDaemO veLLi glass lO oka peg pOsukunnaaDu. marusaTi rOju elaagaina gaDichipotae chaalu ani anukunnaaDu.
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'inta artha raatri vaeLa tanaku evaru phone chaesi unTaaru ani anukunToonE phone receive chaesukunnaDu Saekhar.
tana chevulanu taanae nammalaekapotunnaDu.
avatali vaipu sunnita. poortigaa maikam lO unDaDam valla maaTalu taDabaDutunnaayi.
'neeku naenu maLLI phon chaestaanu' ani annaDu ati kashTam meeda.
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marO rOju modalayyindi. oopiri salapaneeyakunDa pani. elaa ayite aemi pani ayipoyindi. inTiki vachchaesariki artharaatri daaTindi. tana gurinchi evaru wait chaestaaru kanuka tanu inTiki veLLaali anukuni inkonni panulu poorti chaesukunnaaDu tanu.
anta laeTgaa vachchinaa kaani panaaviDa inkaa tana gurinchi unDaDam choosi aScharya pOyaaDu.
'ayyaa, ammagaari inTi nunDi phonu vachchiinaadi. amma kaLLu tirigi paDipOyaaranTa. mimmulanu ee aasupatri ki rammani kabureTTinaaru' haDavuDigaa cheppindi aaviDa.
Hospital address teesukuni carni gaalilO naDipinchaaDu.
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'patient's name?' nurse anta taapigaa aDugutunTae kOpan, tension, tana meeda tanakae jaali.. annI bhaavaalu okaesaari vachchaayi.
ward number telusukuni parugulu teesaaDu. akkaDa chaala nirmalangaa undi sunnita moham. manchi niduralO unnaanu. evaru nannu laepakanDi anna bhaavam moham meeda undi.
'meeru phonu sestaanu ani annaaruTa kadaa ayya. amma aTTanae kookundi eduru soosI soosI. pachchi manchi neeLLu taagalaedu saamI..' cheppukupotundi yaadamma..
tanaku aemi vinapaDaDam laedu. tanaku saraLa kaavaali. antae telusu.
aatma nindistundi sunnita paristhitiki nuvvae kaaraNamani.
hRudayam Odarustundi tanaku aemi kaadu ani.
manasu baadhapaDutundi tana praemanu artham chaesukOlaekapOyaanani.
'DaakTaaru.. ela undi saamI maa yammaa??' eDustu aDugutunna yaadamma gontu..
'Doctor, sunnita ki aemi kaadu kadaa' tana gontu lO vaNuku
evarayina vinagalaru.
'I am sorry.You are??' Doctor ' nemmadigaa aDigaaru.
'I am Sunnita's husband.' 'her beloved' renDO vaakyam poorti avvakunDaanae moogabOyindi gontu.
'She needs rest.I don't expect that being an educated person, u cannot take care of her.She is very delicate and her health is going worse with time. I can't assure anything to u right now' taanu cheppaalsinadi ayyindi annaTTu kadilaaDu Doctor
'ela jarigindi?' manasulOni maaTalanu pedavi palukalaekapoyina kaLLu aDigaayi yaadammanu.
'amma vaaLLa prenDsu ochchaaru saami inTiki mooDu rOjula mundu.
mee gurinchi maaTaaDutu meetO oka saari maaTaaDi sooDamannaaru..maLLI kalasukOvaDaaniki. andukae amma meeku phOnu saesinaadi..adi aDagaTaanike.. aa renDu rOjulu aemi tinalaedu taagalaedu..meetO maaTlaaDi santOsham gaa tinTaanu ani annadi saamI..meeru maLLaa phOnu saestaanu ani annaaranTa kadaa..vaechi vaechi soosaaru..aa raatri kooDa nidura pOlaedu. enta seppina vinipinchukOdu kadaa..eeyaala saayantramu aapheesu nunDi vachchinaaru..teesukeLLina lanchI maLLaa paTTukochchaaru..
meeku phOnu saeddaamani laesi aTTagae koolabaDipoyinaadi baaboo'nOTiki kongu aDDam peTTukuni aeDavaDam modalu peTTindi yaadamma.
'sunnita..maaTaaDu sunnita..Saekhar..nee Saekhar vachchaaDu..kaLLu teravvu' entO anunayamgaa batimaalaaDu Saekhar.
'Sir,can you keep quiet??',nurse jaaligaa choostoo cheppindi.
edurugaa chinnapillaaDi poster. 'sunnitaku pillalanTe praaNam.' evariki chebutunnaaDO teliyadu.sunnita nudiTi meeda chumbistu 'neeku aem kaaduraa..naenu vachchaesaanu' inka nee manasulOni bhaavaalaku naenu padaalu vetakalEnu annaTTu medaDu ika selavu andi..
aa raatri tana mancham pakkanae koorchunnaDu tanu.tala nimurutu aevaevo maaTaDutunnaaDu sunnitatO...
'ayya, ammanu intagaa paemistae enduku vadilaesinaaDO.' artham kaakunDaa undi yaadammaku.
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'ayya, kaaphI..' eduruga yaadamma..
sunnita inkaa paDukunae undi..
'ayya, DaakTaaru ochche Taimu ayinaadi...meeru moham kaDukkOnDi saami.'
aprayatnamgaanae laechi veLLalaa vaddaa annaTTu niluchunDi pOyaaDu..
'ammanu naenu soosukunTaanu saami' odaarpuga annadi yaadamma. endukO amma gurtuku vastundi tanaku.
sunnita melukuvaga unTae vaaTaesukuni eDavaalanipinchindi..peLLi ayina daggira nunDi tanaku anni sunnitanae..ammanu kooDa maripinchindi sunnita praema..amma lOTu tanaku eppuDu kaluganeeyalaedu.
endukO tanu chaalaa onTarigaa pheel ayyaaDu..tana balaanni evaRO teesukeLtunna bhaavana..
'sunnita ki aemi kaadu kadaa yaadamma..' baavi lO nunDi evaro maaTaDutunnaTTu vinipistunnavi aa maaTalu..
'aemi kaadu saami' antaku minchi inka naenu aemi cheppalaenu saami annaTTugaa undi aame mohamlOni bhaavam.
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tanu phresh ayyi vachchaesariki daakTaru chek chaestunnaDu sunnitani..
'Mr.??'
'Shekar'
'Mr.Shekhar,it is a miracle.She is getting fine.Hope she will be conscious by noon' aanandamgaa cheppaDu DaakTaru.
'aemayinaadi baabu?' yaadamma moham lO aatram.
'amma gaaru kOlukunTunnaaranTa yaadamma' aanandamgaa arichi cheppaali ani anipinchindi Saekhar ki..
maLLI nurse feel avutundi ani oorukunnaaDu..
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kaalu kaalina pilli anTae aemiTO artham kaani vaaLLaku Saekhar nu choopistae telustundi.
udayam nunDi ekkaDaa kaalu nilavaDam laedu. Saekhar baabu tanDri ayitae inka elaa unTaadO...saraLaku nayam avutundi ani vinnappaTi nunDi yaadamma ki tana amma,saamila bhavishyattu fast forward lO choosukunTundi.
'Saekhar....Saekhar... I love u ' moolugutundi sunnita..
'ayyaa,ayyaa..amma gaaru mimmulani kalavaristunnaadi..'aayasapaDutoo cheppindi yaadamma..
appaTikae nurse doctor ni pilichindi..
DaakTaru aedO injection ichchaaru..
Saekhar daggaraku vachchi 'Congrats Mr.Shekhar,I think the credit goes to you. Nurse told me just now that you took care of her all the night' appreciate chaeyalaekunDaa unDalaekapOyaaDu DaakTaru..
Saekharki aemi vinipinchaTam laedu..
'DaakTarugaaru, sunnitatO maaTlaaDavachcha??' aem bhaavanO teliyadu...ela cheppalO teliyadu..kaani tanu sunnitatO maaTlaDaali. antae...
'oh,sure,she will wake up in few minutes' ani cheppi veLLipOyaaDu DaakTar..
sunnitanu tana oDilO paDukObeTTukunnaaDu Saekhar...melliga tanu kaLLu teristae 'I love you..Don't leave me' ani cheppaali ani anukunnaaDu..
sunnita melligaa kaLLu terichindi..edurugaa Saekhar.
'I love u..Don't leave me', balaheenamgaa andi sunnita...
'naenu Sareeraanni,nuvvu naa manasuvi..andukae naenu anaali ani anukunna maaTalu nuvvu annaavu...' vaaTesukunToo annaaDu Saekhar. 'Happy Valentine's Day' tanu cheppaali anukunnadi ayipOyinaTTu inka manasu 'tana sunnita' maaTalu vinaali ani aaraaTapaDutunnaTTu sunnita kaLLallOki choosaaDu.
'wish you the same, my dearest valentine' Saekhar kougiTlO karigipOtunnaTTu cheppindi sunnita..
tanaku aemI artam kaakunnaa anni artham ayinaTTu 'amma-saami ilaagE sallagaa undaali aeDukOnDala saami' aanandabhaashpaalanu tuDuchukunToo anukundi yaadamma.
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Hi to all the readers,
This is a story which I wrote approximately after 3 yrs.
I dedicate this story to my valentine and also the few tp friends who r very good critics to me and helped me in understandin life, philosophy, friendship and love.
I like thinking abt names and hence choose Sunnita (the character of my first story which i wrote 3 yrs back . I haven't heard this name from any..but i like it) and Shekhar (the hero of the same story).
I need ur sincere suggestions and criticisms to improve my storyline and other features of the story.
I apologize for any mistaken that can b here in this story ( i mean spelling mistakes). I took Sarala as the name of the heroine and later on changed it to Sunnita. If I cudn't correct at any place..plz forgive me..
Hope u liked the story.
More thoughts in 'Share my Thoughts'
with best wishes n regards,
Voice.
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