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Articles: My Thoughts | paaThakulaku, vimarSakulaku vijNjapti
- SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI
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ee madhya kavitalapeina charchalu maree daari tapputunnaayanE baadhatO ee bahiraMga vijNjaptini chEstoo, ee kriMdi naalugu maaTalu vraastunnaanu. vaaTini aMdaroo sahRudayatatO sweekaristaarani aaSistunnaanu.
1) vyaktigataMgaa naa abhipraayaM EmiTaMTE -
'kavita' anEdi 'illaanE uMDaali' anE ooha kooDaa aMta samaMjasaM kaadEmO?
gaaMdhee chEsina garjana 'kwiT iMDiyaa' kooDaa oka kavitE -- ani prakhyaata vimarSakaagrEsarulu sardESaayi tirumala raavu gaaru oka chOTa annaaru. kavitalO kluptata chaalaa avasaramEgaani, eMta?- anEdaaniki nirvachanaM cheppaDaM kashTamEmO?
konnELLa kritaM oka vaarapatrika oka kathala pOTeeni nirvahiMchi, katha niDivi 8 pEjeelaku miMchakooDadu -- ani vraasiMdi. chivaraku vaaLLu aa saari mooDO bahumati ichchina katha parimiti mooDu reTlu vachchiMdi! kaaraNaM? - aa kathaavastuvu aTuvaMTidi. paaThakulu kooDaa daaniki abhyaMtarapeTTalEdu.
alaagE, oka aaMgla (hiMdee)sinee vaarapatrika sinimaalaku 'rETiMg` istoo uMDEdi. ouT`sTaaMDiMg`ki 5, pheyir`ki 3, poor`ki 1 - ilaa nakshatraalu ichchEvaaru. 5, 4 kooDaa saMvatsaraM mottaMmeeda okka sinimaakee dorikEdi kaadu. ayitE, saMvatsaraM chivarana baaleT`lO maatraM uttama chitraMgaa aa patrikalavaaLLE chivari grED` ichchina sinimaalu gelupoMdEvi!
marO vishayaM - SaMkaraabharaNaM sinimaa chaalaa baagaa aaDiMdi. chaalaamaMdini aDigEvaaDini - aa TeiTil` eMduku peTTaaru? - ani. 'adoka raagaM pEruganuka' - ani cheppinavaaLLa SaataM 80ki peigaanE uMdi. eMtO sookshmaMgaa gamanistEgaani aMdulO vErE arthaM soochitaM ayiMdani bOdhapaDadu!(paamu SaMkaruDiki aabharaNaM kaabaTTi aa pEru saarthakata mariMta hechchiMdi kadaa!) alaa chEyagaligina sattaa kavitalaku kooDaa uMTE baMgaaraaniki taavi abbinaTlE. aTuvaMTi pratyEkatanu saadhiMchaalanE lOlOpala tapana unnavaaLLu prayatnistoonE uMTaaru. okkokkasaari saphalata kalugutuMdi. okkOsaari kalugadu.
2)ika kavitalapeina vastunna vimarSala vishayaM guriMchi -
iMdulO vimarSistunna aMdarikee koddO goppO saamarthyaM uMdani nEnu gamanistunnaanu. iMdulO chakkani, chikkani kluptatanu soochiMchagaligina vaaLLunnaaru, ekkaDa, eMduku baagaalEdO cheppagaliginavaaLLoo unnaaru. mOTugaa vraastunnaa, maMchi maMchi churakalu, pEraDeelu chEyagaliginavaaLLoo unnaaru. vaaLLalO kavitaasakti, kavitaaSakti ekkuvagaa uMDakapOtE alaaMTi samayasphoortitO vaaLLu vraayalEru.
idi vyaktigatameina niMdalaku eMduku daariteestOMdO naaku arthaM kaavaTaM lEdu. nEnu iMdulO chEri reMDunnara nelalu ayiMdi. naaku tOchinavi vraastunnaanu, ennO nErchukuMTunnaanu. naaku telisinavi, sEkariMchinavi naluguritO paMchukOgalugutunnaanu. idaMtaa elaa saadhyaM avutOMdi? - aMTE jamaajeTTeellaaMTi paaThakulu uMdaDabaTTE!
3) dayachEsi aMdaroo kriMdi salahaalanu paaTiMchaMDani kOrutunnaanu.
// vimarSakuDu, vaastav`gaarlaku : mee salahaalu nishpakshapaataMgaa uMTunnaayi.
It is a constructive criticism indeed. Will you kindly try to wait for two or three days after each poem is published, so that many others can give their opinions first? At the present rate, I fear others are shunning to read the bunch of comments due to the acrimonious, yet avoidable remarks and counter-remarks. If you give your remarks in the end to the extent possible, that will be tantamount to the job of a moderator-like critic too. Please do give your remarks. We will take them positively.
// indruDu, paaThakuDu gaarlaku, vaari 'saMbaMdhikulaku' : mee pratyarthulu cheppadalachukunnavaaTini cheppaneeyaMDi. vaaLLu maakEmee Satruvulu kaaru kadaa! salahaalanu istunnaarugaanee maa kavitalanu visirikoTTaTaMlEdu kadaa!
// vraayaDaM maanEsina koMdaru rachayitalaku : meeru maLLee vraayavalasiMdE!
ippaTikE sudeerghameipOyina ee gODunu OpikatO vina/kanavalasiMdigaa aMdarnee maLLee kOrutunnaanu.
manaM vidyaadhikulamE kadaa! jariginadaanni peeDakalagaa bhaaviMchi, manaM saamarasyaanni saadhiMchavalasiMdE.
selavu,
satyaraama prasaad`
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