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General Forum: Literature | | I padyamu yekkaDidO cheppukOnDi | |
| mee iddaroo anna dAntO oppukunToo, nEnu ee SeershikalO pAlgonaTaM mAnEstunnAnu.
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 27, Jul 2008 9:08:48 PM IST
I dAramu prArambhinchinavADigA nAku santOShamu, digulu renDU kalugutunnAyi. rasavattaramaina sAhitIcharchalu jarugutunnanduku santOShangA vunnA, yI dAramunu ArambhinchuTalOni nA asalu uddESamu maruguna paDipOtunnadani digulugA vundi. dayachEsi, iTuvanTi charchalannI rAmakRuShNagAru terichina kottadAram "telusA" lO ayitE bAgunTundani nA abhiprAyam.
Posted by: Mr. SATYANARAYANA PISKA At: 27, Jul 2008 6:43:47 PM IST
ikkaDa padyamu ani SIrShika vunnadi kadaa!
mari itaraprakriyalEla muchchaTiMchedaru?
padyamunaku ChaMdassu kaladu
aMdu yatipraasaalu, gaNapoMtanamulu ityaadi niyamamulu kalavugadaa
okapari aalOchiMchuDu.
saahityamanE SIrShika ayinachO anni prakriyalapei charchiMchavachchunani naa abhipraayamu.
aapeina mI yiShTamu
Saastri
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 27, Jul 2008 10:53:03 AM IST
pravahlikAvRuti - ?
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 26, Jul 2008 11:08:44 PM IST
yanArailaku unna m&lEchChata
vArikichchunu konta swEchChata
inDiyAlO unna swachChata
- - - - - ikkaDekkaDidee?
(idi oka mutyAlasaraM + koonalamma kAmbinEshanu)
manaM pOshTu cheyyadalachukonna aMSaM oka kontA lETu.
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 26, Jul 2008 11:02:13 PM IST
akkaDa nEnU kAsta AgAnu. jaladhi kAvachchunA, ani. ayitE mundu pAdaMlO eDada tO deeniki prAsa. kanaka mATaku arthaM teliyakapOyinA, alA unchAnu.
ippuDu SabdaratnAkaraMlO choostE, jaDadhi, jaladhi - renTikee samudramu anna artham undi. mari jaDadhi samudramu elA avutundi? idi saMskRutaM telisina vALLu evarEnA cheppavalasina vishayaM. mana (nA) paridhini dATindi.
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 26, Jul 2008 8:26:44 PM IST
namaskAram rAmakRuShNagArU!
mIru vrAsina chivaripATalO "Ananda jaDadhi" annAru. 'jaladhi' anTE samudramani telusu. 'jaDadhi' anTE?!........
Posted by: Mr. SATYANARAYANA PISKA At: 26, Jul 2008 2:24:00 PM IST
gata padirOjula krindanu
atulita utsAhamunanu apa-attribu-
shita maina dAni savaraNa
yati prAsalatODa nosagu yatnaMbidigO!
mis-attributed- dushTa samAsamE (m&lEchCHata ichchuchunna swEchChata!)
prati pakshi unmAda paravaSata nadiyimpa
....
anna padyaM (idi oka ragaDa - khachchitamaina pEru teliyadu, intamaTukoo) kinnerasAni pATalalOnidani annAnu.
endukani? idi gurtunDi -
kinnerasAni pATalu - enimidava bhAgamu - kinnera vaibhavamu
toorpulO tellanai tOchina dusha@h kAnta
toli mAvi lEboota doosenu pikee kAnta
talalapai ratanAlu taLataLA merisETi
nalla trAchulu dooki nATyamADETaTlu
merasindi kinnerA ------- oDDullu
orisindi kinnerA
........
mooDu jAmula proddu mogi jArinadi minTa
venuka paTTenu tammi viri mElvalapu panTa
kaLLammu tuDichi panDina gOdumala kuppa
toorpu gAlulaku toorpAra paTTina yaTlu
jArindi kinnerA --------- paiDigA
mArindi kinnerA
I didn't of course remember all the words, so much as the neat beat. You can see the set of four fiva-mAtras in each line.
Actually, I see the same thing in another chapter, except he manages to give the beat a certain oomph!
kinnerasAni pATalu - nAlugava bhAgamu - kinnera sangeetamu
kOnalannee munchukoni vachchu selayETi
chAna kinnerasAni jalajalA sraviyinchu
taragalO, pai kegayu
nurugulO, krongrotta
tEne kAluva loorenO - amRutampu
vAna chinukulu jArenO
....
talirAku kanna mettani yandamunu bOvu
taruNi kinnerapATa tAnamanduTa choochi
eDadalO, Ananda
jaDadhilO, lOkAlu
pulakitammayi pOyenO - rasavArdhi
chulukitammayi pOyenO
eeyanni paTTukuni (tamAshAkanE anukOnDi) jaRuk`SAstri 'pAshANa pAka prabhoo' anToo oka padyaM rAsADu. A taravAta eppuDO kanapaDDappuDu satyanArAyaNagAroka chempakAya koTTAraTa. idi pAvani SAstri okasAri cheppADu.
kinchit` tikta kashAya bADaba rasa kshEpAti rEkhAti vAk`
sanchAra prachayAvakASamulalO, kavyudgha! ganDASmamul`
chanchalleela nudAtta vAggarimatO sAdhinchi vEdhimpumA
panchArinchi pravahlikAkRuti kRutin` pAshANapAkaprabhoo!
------------ jalasootram rukmiNeenAdha SAstri, guruvu gArini gurinchi!
It's possible there may be minor typos. I welcome corrections. I am a little unsure of the last couple of words in the first line. The rest should be okay.
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 26, Jul 2008 1:16:32 PM IST
anukOvachchunu, andukE maLLee aDigindi.khachchitaMgA idi anna riplai ostundEmOnani.
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 25, Jul 2008 6:01:44 PM IST
Subhagaaru vraasinadi chooSaaru kadaa raamakRushNagaaroo.
'kRushi' anE padaaniki ikkaDa 'aakarshaNaSakti' anE arthaM saripOtuMdanipistOMdi naakeitE.
(enormous magnetic power) vipareetaMgaa laagukonE Saktiki aa dhanussu virigipaDiMdi - anukOvachchunu kadaa!
Posted by: SATYA RAMA PRASAD KALLURI At: 25, Jul 2008 5:41:48 PM IST
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