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General Forum: Poetry | | kavitala pai vastunna vimarSalu nirmANAtmakaMgA vuMTunnAyA? | |
| Sankoo maLLee modaleTTaaraa. :(
kavita ilaa unDaali alaa kaadu ani cheptunnappuDu, vimarSa ilaa unDaali alaa kaadu ani cheppakooDadaa? :))))) :p
Posted by: Viswa K At: 13, Nov 2006 3:54:02 PM IST
aa link lO naakEmee kanipinchalEdanDi oka jOku tappa. :( intaku mundu cheppinaTTu alaanTi raatalani vadileyyaTam manchidi. vimarSinchaTam kooDaa Taim vEsTE kadanDee viSwa gaaru. aa vishayaMlO eDiTar ni anukOvaali. kaneesam aarTicals vishayaMlOnannaa canTrOl vaari daggara unDElaa cheyyagaligitE ilaanTi vaaTiki aaskaaram unDadu. akkaDa mee vimarSalO etti choopaalsindi kooDaa naakEdee kanipinchalEdu. Your comment is true and right. ghaaTugaa kooDaa lEdu nijam cheppaalanTE. :)
ayinaa aksharaabhyaasaaniki ee kavitaki link ekkaDundanDee? ilaanTi vaariki kavitvam raayaTam nErpinchamani analEdE. koddO goppO arhata unna rachanalani inkonchem baagaa raasETaTTu prOtsaaham andinchamanE nEnannadi.
Edi paDitE adi kavitani, adi raasinavaari paTla gauravam choopinchamani kaadu. vimarSanaarhamaina rachanala gurinchi, vaaTi meeda vachchE vimarSala gurinchE nEnu cheppEdi.
Posted by: మోహన రాగం At: 13, Nov 2006 4:25:59 PM IST
//Secondly the topic of this discussion may take ugly turn involving them too.//
mari Saastri gaarini indu lO invaalv chEstE agleegaa anipinchaTalE daa ?
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 13, Nov 2006 4:25:38 PM IST
annaTlu viSva gaaru , mee orjinal iDee kaakunDaa ee musugu aiDeelO kooDaa konni "lutavika " vraayanDi. chuusi anandistaamu !
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 13, Nov 2006 4:12:47 PM IST
http://www.telugupeople.com/discussion/comments.asp?tc1=47732
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pai linkulO mee kaamenT ki vaastav gaari kaamenT ki tEDaa gamanincharaa ?
meelo kasi kanipistundi. mee aiDeelu nirvaahulu DileeT chESaaranna kOpamE kanipistundi.
indulO kavitvam lEdu ani suuTigaa cheppalEraa ? nandi meeda pandi meeda peTTi vimarSinchaDamEnaa ? pOni meeru vimarSinchaaka emainaa aapaaDaa raastuunE pOtunnaaru kadaa / ee kOpam aa kOpam nirvaahulameeda , vayassu panDina vaarimeeda chuupinchaDam vasaramElEdu..
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 13, Nov 2006 4:02:42 PM IST
Posted by: Viswa K At: 13, Nov 2006 3:25:43 PM IST
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viSva gaaru ,
mee Saili chuustE naaku meeru andhruDu , aanDhruDEmO anipistundi. evarainaa paravaalEdu gaani. mee vimarSalu nimaaNaatmakamgaa cheyyanDi chaalu. intaku minchi Emi akkaralEdu !
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 13, Nov 2006 3:45:36 PM IST
Posted by: Viswa K At: 13, Nov 2006 3:25:43 PM IST
ee pOsT naa pOsTulani uddESinchEnaanDee?
aksharaabhyaasam analEdu kadanDee viSwa gaaroo pillalu tappaTaDugulu vEstE vaariki nErpinchinaTTE ani endukanukOru?
vimarSinchaTaaniki elaagaitE mundukochchaarO alaanE prOtsahinchaTaaniki munduku raavaTam tappanTaaraa?
nooTiki nooru Saatam mee maaTalatO Ekeebhavistaanu kaanee vimarSakulaki teleedanTaaraa vaaru vimarSistunna rachana 'free saiTu' dorikindani raasindO, pEru prachuraNalO choosukOvaalani raasindO? alaanTi raatalani vimarSinchaTam kooDaa anavasaramanE anTaanu. kaanee koddO goppO sattaa unnavaarini prOtsahistE vachchE nashTam EnTi?
kavigaa vayasuni parigaNistE baavunTundi kaanee kavi vayasu mukhyam kaadanE naa abhipraayam.
Posted by: మోహన రాగం At: 13, Nov 2006 3:45:02 PM IST
SORRY IT WAS A TYPO .. here is the corrected one
There you go .... So you want to post your comments only on their poems, why to waste time "ON" others who are not even poets?
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 3:43:14 PM IST
May be 5 or 6 only can be termed as poets. That's it. Rest of them think they are poets.
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There you go .... So you want to post your comments only on their poems, why to waste time of others who are not even poets?
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 3:41:01 PM IST
Posted by: మోహన రాగం At: 13, Nov 2006 3:08:59 PM IST
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//asvaadinchaDaaniki , vimarSinchaDaniki telusukOgalugutE chaalu //
vimarSinchi vadileyyaDamlEdu kadaa ? vaadOpavaadanalatO dimma tirigistunnaaru.
sinimaala vishayam vadileyyanDi.
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kavitala vishayamlOki vastE okokari mainDlOnunDi vachchina aalOchana vidhaanam okOlaa unTundi. vimarSakulu daanni eDiT chEsi ilaa vraaste baagunTundi ani chepputaaru. adi sadvimarSa , alaakaaka ettipoDupulu , tulanaaDaDam chEstE mundu nuvvu vraasi chuupinchi appuDu maaTlaaDu ani anaalsOstundi..
nEnu chaalaa baagaa vimarSinchagalanu , ani elaa anukunTaarO , kavitalu kooDaa nEnu chakkagaa vraasaanu anukunTaaru . ee saiTlO 4 , 5 gurE kavulunnappuDu aa 4, 5 ippuDu kavitalu vraayaTam lEdu endukani ?
kavitalu vraayaDaaniki idi sarainaa plEsu kaadani ardham ayipOyindi. alaa enduku bedaragoDutunTaaru ani aDugutE samadhaanam cheppaDam kannaa sambandhamlEnivi maTlaaDuTunTaaru . andukE kavitalu vaaru kooDaa vraasi " aalOk " suuTi vimarSakuDu " laa uddarinchamani naa kOrika.idi ardhamlEni vaadana kaadu chaalenj gaa teesukOvaali viSva gaaru ani manavi..!
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 13, Nov 2006 3:40:12 PM IST
kottavaarini ghaaTugaa vimarSistE vachchE laabham kannaa nashTamE ekkuva. mukhyaMgaa ilaanTi vaari vishayaMlO 'raasinadantaa chetta' anE badulu adi chetta endukayyindi, ekkaDekkaDa sari chEsukOvachchulaanTi salahaalu istE vaariki upayOgakaraMgaa unTundi. enduku panikiraani, E maatram improov chEsukOlEni chetta raastE daaniki "raasinadantaa chetta' ani vimarSinchaTam kooDaa danDagE. :)))))
Posted by: మోహన రాగం At: 13, Nov 2006 3:19:10 PM IST
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