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General Forum: Poetry | | kavitala pai vastunna vimarSalu nirmANAtmakaMgA vuMTunnAyA? | |
| Adenandi Amrapaligaru nenu kooda cheptondi,
Critics can be mroe objective and Poets can be more practical
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 2:02:06 PM IST
Sung to the tune of ammaayE sannagaa
rangaaraav challagaa
I threDDE teruvagaa
TIpI lO kavulantaa
viSwaa pai paDDArE,
viSwaa K sUTigaa
kaamenTlE koTTagaa
a pOsTlU nachchanivaaru
yudhdhaalE chEsaarE
Em pOsTulO O O
Em kavitalO O O
Em pOsTulO Em kavitalO
mUDOvaaDiki Timepass lE
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kavitala pEjI anTE
raayalaseema graamam .. ( ammammaa! )
vimarSala pErutO zarigE
aDugaDuguna samgraamam .. ( ammammaa! )
kavitE pOsTayitE ayyE pIlikala vastram
Critic kanipistE kavi vEsenu brahmaastram
Friend ayitE chetta kavitayina aadi neetivaakyamE
lEkunTE bhaaratamayinaa adi bootu kaavyamE
Em pOsTulO O O
Em kavitalO O O
Em pOsTulO Em kavitalO
mUDOvaaDiki Timepass lE :))
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 1:57:31 PM IST
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Enti oka pedda Post kottesariki andaru paaripoyaaru?
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Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 1:33:42 PM IST
pardon my typos ,, there r just too many of them to post a correction :))
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 1:22:41 PM IST
If a poet cncentrates on what he is doing and the critic does what he is supposed to do then everything is in its place
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Exactly! But over here, the poets and the critics are getting into a kind of war, instead of respecting each-other.
If the critic finds real crap of a poem then s/he better not post any comment on that and if someone finds a critic's comment filthy, its better to ignore and move ahead. (MAny people said this before and I 'm just reiterting it)..
Why dont we directly address the root cause of the whole issue and put an end to it ...
Let start with Critics first:
Vishwa garu, I do see a point in your criticism but the popular feeling over here is that they are a bit rude. Wont it be a good idea (you being a critic yourself) to take this as a feedback from the common public and be a lil soft in your criticism - Dont mistake me .. I am not asking you to change yourself here, offering criticism in a polite manner would strengthen the relationship even though you are tough.
You definitely want to hear something like "Vishwa is a perferctionist man, it's tough to impress him, But one day I will!" instead of "Vishwa is an idiot man, all he does is to find fault - Just ignore his comments!"
Again, its just a personal opinion of mine and its upto you to take it or not ... Also, correct me if I am wrong, But I feel you tend to get extremely emotional at the slightest of provocation. You may want to look at the other side too.
About Poets
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Guyz, Try to udersyand critics too - everyone does not like every type of poetry. Different people have different expectations - it would be tough to impress a scholar with an ordinary poem. As long as the comments are not filthy, see what is applicable to you. Feel happy that the critic has acknoledged the presence of your poem and posted a comment.. ( For instance, none of these faous critics has posted any comments on my poems... could be because they didnt find them worth a comment - that way your poems are better ... ) - As Shankar said, each negative comment should motivate you to post more ...
Finally,
WHO WILL MAKE VISHWA SAY "BABOOOOI .. I AGREE YOUR POEM IS GREAT! ITS SIMPLY SUPERB!! AND PLEASE DONT POSE ANY MORE!" :))
Not Kidding .. mez damn serious this time :))
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 1:11:33 PM IST
hmmmmmmm,
ONE TRIES TO DICTATE HOW A POEM SHOULD BE WRITTEN AND THE OTHER TRIES TO DICTATE HOW A COMMENT SHOULD BE POSTED... AND ALL THIS LEADS TO A STORM IN A TEACUP!
Happy Fighting folks! But please let the poet be her/himself and the critic be him/herself - Both are necessary for better poetry.
Posted by: Malakpet Rowdy At: 13, Nov 2006 12:41:26 PM IST
Posted by: Viswa K At: 13, Nov 2006 11:47:28 AM IST
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naa mesej ni kooDaa DleeT chEstE naaku vachchina nashTam EmilEdu. nEnu meelaa gilagila koTTukonulenDi.modaTa perSnal gaa vimarSa pErutO meeru chEstunnadi nachchakanE mee mesEj pOyunTundi ani enduku anukOkooDadu ? vimarSalu elaa unDaalO ikkaDa chaalaa mandi vaari abhipraayaalu cheppaaru alaagE Saastri gaaru vimarSalanEvi hundaagaa unTE baagunTundi ani vaaru cheppaaru. daani meeda meeru virusuku paDDaaru adE kadaa ikkaDa jarigina vishayam ? deennE buradalu jallukOvaDam anTaaru. mee vyasaallO anovasaramgaa Saastri gaarini eeDichaaru. vayasunu dRushTilO peTTukOni gowravinchakkaralEdaa ? kavulaku vayasu , parideeloki raadu ani , vimarSincha mohamaaTam ani mee musugunu samardhinchukunTunnaaru. Saastri gaaru meeru ichchina linku ( naaku open kaavaTamlEdu ) Emi vraasaarO teleedu gaani adi ikkaDa aprastutam. vaaru Saastri gaarilaagE hundaagaa vimarsinchaaru gaani meela musugu tagilinchukoni ( naalaa "aaDadaani" laa ) vimarSinchalEdanukunTaa.
paigaa meeru pani kaTTukOni Saastri gaarini 20 roopaayilaku Dabbu peTTi konnaaru kaabaTTi kvaaliTee chuustunnaaru adE ee saiT free kaabaTTi chettalu pOsTu tunnaaru ani annaaru , mee mesEji aDimin gaariki kooDaa suuTi gaa tagilindi abhyantara karamainadi gaa teesukunnaaru anTE saamanya kavulani meeru enta chitra himsaki guri chEstunnaaru ?? ardham avaTamlEdaa ?
ee saiT yaajamaanyam meeku vimarSaka chakravarti pOsT Evainaa baadhyata anTagaTTaaraa ? pOnee ? ikkaDa chetta pOsTu tunnaaru ani gaggolu peDutunnaaru ??
Saastri gaaru ekkaDa mimarSinchaarO akkaDE chuusukonDi. ee Ti.pilO vaarini enduku laagutunnaaru.vaarini pratee daanTlO laagaDamlO mee maanasika paripakvatani baiTapeDutundi
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 13, Nov 2006 12:25:06 PM IST
hO.... mesEji DeeleeT chESaaraa ? thaanks saar aDmin gaaru :)
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 13, Nov 2006 11:11:29 AM IST
vyaktigata niMdArOpaNalu, vimarSiMchaDamE vRuttigA eMchukOvaDaM, paripakvata lEni medaDutO avatalivArini kiMchaparustU vimarSiMchaDam - viSvagArU, mIkidi tagadu.
Posted by: Mr. Trivikrama At: 13, Nov 2006 9:56:16 AM IST
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 12, Nov 2006 9:50:13 AM IST
100 SAtam karekTu..
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 12, Nov 2006 11:13:12 AM IST
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