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General Forum: Literature | | telugulO padyarachana avasaramA? | |
| Saastri gaaru,
naaku padya rachana tO shikaayat lEdu. meeru okka saari nEnu raasindi maLLee chooDanDi, naa sandEhamantaa padya rachana ki, patana mavutunna viluvala ki vunna linku gurinchE. naaku padyaalanTE chaala ishTam. ee saiTu lO padyaala antyaakshari nEnE modalu peTTina, kaavalanTE kindi linku chooDanDi
http://discussion.telugupeople.com/discussion/index.asp?board=-3&page=32&topicCode=64&tc1=1167&tc2=0
padya rachana nu veliveyyaalanna aalOchanaki kooDaa nEnu vyatirEkam. daaniki sambandhinchina paaThakulu daaniki vunDanE unTaaru.
Sarma gaaru,
niyamaallO, pada bandhaallO paDi, kavitvaaniki neeLLodilitEnE, asalu goDava modalayyEdi. padyam batiki baTTa kaTTakapOtE daaniki kaaraNam , padyaanni penchi pOshinchina vaaLLa vallanE ekkuvEmO okkasaari aalOchiddaam. manam sRushTinchukunna kaavya bhaasha enta mandi prajalaki arthamavutundi? telugu ni chandassulO irikinchaTaaniki, enta sanskRutaanni digumati chEsukunnam ? anta telugu ki padyam dooramayipOtoo vachchindi. gata veyyELLa telugu saahityamlO, enta mandi saraLamayina padaalatO padyaalu raasinaru? pannenDava Sataabdam lO sOmana, maLLee inchuminchu padinEhava (?) SataabdamlO pOtana, padihEDu lO vEmana, konta varaku SreenaathuDu, tikkana. raayani vaaLLatO kooDaa shikaayat lEdu, vaaLLa paaThaku lu vEru, vaari kOsam vaaLLu aa bhaasha lO raasukunnaru. okkO paata kaavyam teesukuni oka padyam chadavaalanTE, prati padaaniki artham sanskRutamu - telugu Dikshanari choosi telusukOvaalsina, haalatundi. aa vidhangaa padyam , paaThakulani parimitam chEsukunToo pOyindi. E kavitaa roopamayinaa chadivEvaari sankhyani baTTE kadaa, nilabaDEdi. inka padyam eTlaa nilabaDutundi? eevidhamayina praSnalu raakunDaa eTlaa vunTayi? saraLamayina padaalatO vachchina Sreenaathuni chaaTuvulu vEmana padyaalani maa vooLLO chaala mandi chaduvu raani vaaLLu kooDa cheppEvaaLLu. aa vidhangaa avi chaalaa varaku nilabaDagaligaayi. padyaaniki aadaram lEnanta maatraana, viluvalu patanam avvaTlEdEmO, viluvalaki arthaalu maaripOtunnaayi.
Posted by: Saleem At: 13, Jun 2005 12:34:49 PM IST
adisarE salIM bhayyA!
telugupadyAla aMtyAxarilO SrISrIgAri sirisiri muvvalu pOShT chEstunna nIku I anumAnaM eMduku vachchiMdi? telugu bhAShA sravaMtilO padyAlu, gadyAlu, vachana kavitalu, gEyAlu, pATalu ivannI bhAgAlEkadA. vATilO padyarachananu mAtraM eMduku veliveyyAli? okavELa sAmAnyulaku ardhaM kAkapOtE, kavulu saraLameina bhAShalO vrAstE sari. allAMTi padyAlu ennO vunnAyi. vudAharaNaku sirisiri muvvalE.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 13, Jun 2005 9:19:16 AM IST
nijamae saliim bhaay chiikaTi aaTaku sai sai ni kamdamloe raasinaa baagumDadu. viluvalu taggipoetunnaayi ani anii aapai padya rachana gurimchi maaTlaaDaDamloe uddaeSyam EmiTamTae,
niyamaanusaaram raasae kavitvam padyam gadaa. asalu niyamaalanu pakkana peTTi( ichchavachchina padajaalamtoe) kavitvam raastunna roejulaloe padyam bratiki baTTa kaTTaenaa ani anumaanam velibuchchaDamae.
apuurva maina prakriya padyam mari adae avasaramm ani anumaanam kaligae roejulu raavaDaaniki kaaraNam digajaarutunna viluvalu kaavaa???????? Emoe mari.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 12, Jun 2005 11:20:03 PM IST
salIM bhAy
ikkaDa viluvalamATa ellAvunnA, I padyarachana anEdi manatelugu bhAShaku dakkina apUrva varaM. oka padyam konni nibhaMdanalaku lObaDi vrAyAli. aMduvalla naDakalO, SeililO oka kramapadhdhati vuMTuMdi.
ika bhASha, bhAvaM aMTAvA ! mallepuvvu chEtiki istE dAnini sadviniyOgaM chEsukOvaDam nI vaMtu. muriki kAlavalO paDEstAvO, bhAryakistAvO, deivapUjaku viniyOgistAvO.
telugubhAShalO unna 56 axarAlani sarasameina padhdhatilO kUrchi mATlADanU vachchu, pachchibUtulugAneinA vADavachchu. adi vAri vAri samskAraMpei AdhArapaDi vuMTuMdi.
allAgE padya rachanakUDA.
chIkaTi ATaku sei sei ani kaMdapadyaMlOnU vrAyavachchu. dAniki vunna viluva dAniki vuMTuMdi. ippuDu vastunna sinimAllO pATalu rakarakAlugA vunnAyi. koMtamaMdiki nachchutOMdi. koMtamaMdi asahyapaDutunnAru.
lOkO bhinna ruchi: nIku iShTaM lEkapOtE padyaM chadavaku, vrAyaku. aMtEkAni asalu padyarachanE anavasaraM ani migilinavAri iShTAnni kAdanaDaM sababA?
manadi matasahanAnni pATiMchE dESaM. nEnu allAni, krIstuni prArdhistE kAdaMTAvA? adEvidhaMgA rAmuNNE prArdhiMchamani ninnaMTE sababA? bhAva, bhASha, vyakti svAtaMtryaM manaku mana rAjyAMga istunna prAdhamika hakku.
AlOchiMchu salIM bhAy
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 12, Jun 2005 9:25:50 PM IST
Sarma gaaru,
"raanu raanu viluvalu digajaaripOtunnaayi anaTaaniki, ee anumaanamE pedda nidarSanam ! "
telugu lO padya rachana avasaramaa lEdaa anna praSna tO digajaaripOtunna viluvalEmiTi? assalu telugu lO padyam lEkapOyinaa, digajaaripOyE viluvalEmiTi? cheekaTi aaTaku sai sai ni kandam lO raasinaa kooDaa, daanikEm viluva raadu kada :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 12, Jun 2005 12:49:14 PM IST
saliim gaaruu
aamkhoem mae kyaajii dopehalaa baadal
baadal mae kyajii kisii kaa aamchal
aamchal mae kyaajii ajab si hal chal
choeliikae piiChae kyaa hai
ii remTikii taeDaa gamanistae viluvalu digajaaraDam teliyadaa
virivi niivai madhupamu naenai paravasimchu taruNamidae
chiikaTi aaTaku sai sai. nii chiiraa raikaku bai bai
idi chaaladaa digajaarutunna viluvalu telupaDaaniki.
ilaa emta chepitae amtaa umdi. emta chepitae amtumdi??
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 11, Jun 2005 9:43:46 PM IST
Sarma gaaru,
meeru digajaaripOtunnaayi anTunna viluvalu EmiTi, avi eTlaa digaajaaripOtunnaayi?
Posted by: Saleem At: 10, Jun 2005 11:30:41 PM IST
teluguloe padya rachana avasaramaa, ilaamTi anumaanam kalugutumdanna uuha kuuDaa raalaedu naaku. bahuSaa padyam amTae unna ishTamae amduku karaNam kaaboelu.
ilaa aDigae kannaa asalu rachanalu avasaramaa anukumTae poelaa??
niyamaalanu anusaristuu padaalanu amdamgaa podagaDam oka kaLa. alaa amdamaina padaalanu ardhavamtamgaa cheyyaDam aa kaLaku merugu. merugulaeni amdam amdam laeni meruguu nirgamdha kusumam laamTivi.
aaTagaaDi naipuNyam pradarSimchukoevaDaaniki olimpiks unnaayi avi avasaramaa anikuuDaa anukoevachchu.
avasaram anukunnaaroe laedoe mari amdaru mahaatmulu padya kavitvam cheppaeru. aitae vaaLLu mahaatmulaa ani praSnistae samaadhaanam cheppaDam kuuDaa kashTamaipoeyimdi.
naalugu aksharaalu aTuu iTuu barakagaligae prativaaDuu kavi ayi kuurchunnaaDu.
Srii Srii gaari mahaaprasthaanam gurimchi telisinamtagaa aa mahaniiyuDu raasina Chamdoe baddhamaina padyaalagurimchi evarikii teliidu.
saahitii samaraamgaNachakravartiki ii anumaanam kaligi umTae paarijaataapaharaNam velugu chuusaenaa aamukta maalyada asalu umDaenaa.
raanu raanu viluvalu digajaaripoetunaayi ani cheppaDaaniki ii anumaanamae pedda nidarSanam
Sishya rikam chaesina vaaDae guruvu kavitvaanni gouravimchakapoevaDam ammdhuralamaina manakae chellimdi. amdku udaaharaNa Srii en Tii raamaaraavu viSvanaadha satyanaaraayaNagaari SishyuDu kaanii Tank Bund miida aa mahaniiyuDi vigraham maatram peTTimchalaedu.
bhaagya nagari yaSoebhaagyamuurtula pamkti
viSvanadhaku laedu vigrahammu
bhuvana vijayammubuggiyai poeyenanna
kavula vibhavammu aggiloe kaalenanna
avani kavigaamchi praja haasyamaaDuchunna
kavanamallamganadiyaela kaamuDanna
pai aavaedananu padyamgaa kaakumDa imkaa amdamgaa cheppaDaaniki prayatnimchamDi evarainaa appuDu telustumdi padyam rachimchaDam avasaramoe kaadoe
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 10, Jun 2005 12:15:36 PM IST
reply to comments posted in ' literature 'section
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 6, May 2005 9:38:24 PM IST
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu Aandhrudu At: 4, May 2005 11:27:12 PM IST
I heartfully appreciate your refort. I hope it will lead to you a reasonable 'academic' discussion. I guess I can provide you a handful data, in that direction. If you want go about Sanskrit Vs. telugu, reading veeraShaiva poettry of 12-14 th centuries might give you a better idea. I have many questions, let me compile then when I get some time.
- Saleem
Posted by: Saleem At: 5, May 2005 6:14:07 AM IST
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