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General Forum: Poetry | | kavitvam teerutennulu | |
| halO sujeet gaaru, mee bhaavaalani cheppaTaaniki chEsina prayatnam baavundanDi kaanee kiraN gaaru cheppinaTlu ee pada prayOgaalu chaalaa saarlu vaaDEsinavE.. mee bhaavaalani konchem DifarenT gaa cheppE prayatnam chEyanDi.. just a suggestion :)
chalam manchi rachayita ani andariki telusu gaanee aayana chaalaa manchi kavitvam kuuDaa raasaarannadi bahuSaa kontamandikE telisi vunDochchu.. evari daggarainaa chalam gaari kavitalu vunTE dayachEsi pOsT chEyagalaru :)
Posted by: Nishigandha At: 28, Jun 2005 5:39:32 PM IST
thx ..andi :) but ivi maatram copy kaadu &nenu poet ni kaadu ....just my feeling cheppanu anthe.. by the way iam sujeethkiran ...from KUWAIT.nice to meet u.
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:38:26 PM IST
thx ..andi :) but ivi maatram copy kaadu &nenu poet ni kaadu ....just my feeling cheppanu anthe.. by the way iam sujeethkiran ...from KUWAIT.nice to meet u.
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:28:28 PM IST
''vennela reyi ne odilo padukuni nee chekkili muddadaalani
undi ....nee kanulu varshinchu samayaana ninnu naa edalo daachukuni
odaarchaalani undi ....manchu kurise vela nee vechati dehanni
hathukovalani undi .......aakali veyu samayaana naa chetulatho neeku
annam tinipinchalani undi .. sakhi ...neraveruna naa ee andamaina
kala''
idi ela undi hello friends cheppandi mee openion?
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:20:50 PM IST
''parimalatvam nindina manasuna oohinchu nee manogatam ....kadali
lothullo daagina naa prema mounam daalchina kshanamu na cheli nee
gurinchina alochanale naa oppiri ave naaku sarvasvam ...naa
aasa ..sawa ,aaradhana neeve ..naa dhyanam neeve ..naa vedana
neeve ..naa alochana ..naa nireekshana ..naa sampaadana naa
kanneeru ,,naa santosham ..naa prati kadalika needai jeevistunan ee
chiru jeevini karuninchaleva ...cheli needi inta katina
hrudayama''......
ivi naa modati kavitalu kaavu ....avi DAIRY lo unnayi ...ivi ee madhya raasinavi ...is this GOOD?:)
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:17:06 PM IST
''premanu kuripinche nee kallaloni mamatanuraagala
nindudanam ... ....amma premalo ni mamakaaram ni mudaga kalipi
tinipinchina naa chinnatanam ...pasi paapa bosninavvulalo unna
mamatala anubandha bandhavyam ...naa priyurali uchvaana nichwasala
lonu kanipinche anuraagam ...maruvalenivi ...naa jeevitantam naa
manasu lo mamatala nilichipoyevi'' ..
howz this one friends:)
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:14:09 PM IST
hi friends ...i wrote some poetrys ...ela unnayo cheptaru kadoo:)''needaina swasalo jeevam posukunna naa aasaki ooprinichi ....naa
hrudayam lo prema ane agaadhanni srushtinchaavu.neeve lokam la
bratukutunna naalo jevitam pai aasani...prema ni chigurimpa
chesavu...nee manasu ane visala hrudayam lo chotu maatram
ivvalekapoyavu ...cheli ...neechirunavvu kosamai konni vela sarlu
maraninchia iana oka sari janminchaalani undi....aa chirunavvu ni
andichava sakhi............''
ela undi ee kavita cheppandi friends:)
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:09:25 PM IST
hi friends ...i wrote some poetrys ...ela unnayo cheptaru kadoo:)''needaina swasalo jeevam posukunna naa aasaki ooprinichi ....naa
hrudayam lo prema ane agaadhanni srushtinchaavu.neeve lokam la
bratukutunna naalo jevitam pai aasani...prema ni chigurimpa
chesavu...nee manasu ane visala hrudayam lo chotu maatram
ivvalekapoyavu ...cheli ...neechirunavvu kosamai konni vela sarlu
maraninchia iana oka sari janminchaalani undi....aa chirunavvu ni
andichava sakhi............''
ela undi ee kavita cheppandi friends:)
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:06:27 PM IST
hi friends ...i wrote some poetrys ...ela unnayo cheptaru kadoo:)''needaina swasalo jeevam posukunna naa aasaki ooprinichi ....naa
hrudayam lo prema ane agaadhanni srushtinchaavu.neeve lokam la
bratukutunna naalo jevitam pai aasani...prema ni chigurimpa
chesavu...nee manasu ane visala hrudayam lo chotu maatram
ivvalekapoyavu ...cheli ...neechirunavvu kosamai konni vela sarlu
maraninchia iana oka sari janminchaalani undi....aa chirunavvu ni
andichava sakhi............''
ela undi ee kavita cheppandi friends:)
Posted by: Mr. sujeethkiran nalamaaru At: 28, Jun 2005 5:00:48 PM IST
naaku nachchina atyadbhutamaina kavitaatmaka vaakyaalu ani maroka daaraM teruddaamaa? ippaTikE ekkuvayyaayaMTaaraa?
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 21, Jun 2005 6:25:23 PM IST
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