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General Forum: Poetry | | niSSabda kavita | |
| subrahmaNyam ii paaTa kaasta chuuDamDii. imkaa puurti cheyyalaedu kaanii aa sagaannae vaestunaa kaasta chuusi cheppamDi.komchem faasT biiT loe kaalaejii kurraaLLu paaDukoevaDamkoesamanii, bhaashani kaasta bigi taggakumDaa kaa paaDukoevaalanii chaestunna prayatnamloe bhaagam idi
sannajaaji tiige vamTi annulaminnaa
naa manasudoechukunna nuvvu anniTaminaa
aanula minna O guvvala chenna
chennula minnaa niivanniTa minnaa
kannulaloe velugulu kani
vennela virisaenanukuni
kolanuloeni kaluva moevi vichchukoedaTae
tanakaa kannula chennulu laevani nochchukoedaTae
chirunagavula doralipaDae
haruvulu maakeruvimmani
sirimallelu paruguna nii dariki chaerunae
nii chirunavvuna chaerupoevu varamu koerunae
kalikii nii naDakalaloe
oliki paDae vayyaaram
komchemaina naerpamamTu amchakoerunae
raayamcha ninnu koluva niidu pamcha chaerunae
imkoe remDu charaNaalu kuuDaa unnaayi
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 12, May 2005 10:23:21 PM IST
OnaaTiki iinaaTivaaramdariloekii maeTi aipoetaaDu ii subrahmaNyam ani naakanipistoemdi. SriivaaNipai kavita baagumdi amTae adi chinnamaaTa.
niivaaNinoe vaaNi aaDaalanii
aavaaNi niibaaNi paaDaalanii
SriivaaNi niikittu aaSiiSSulu
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 12, May 2005 10:15:41 PM IST
niSSabda kavita aMTE chitra paTaM kaavachchEmOkaanee maa uddESaMlO maatraM niSSabda kavita aMTE pada chitraM.. please read this... u will come to know what i mean..
http://www.eemaata.com/issue30/nissabdam.pdf
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 12, May 2005 1:37:34 PM IST
EDavaku EDavaku verri nAtallI
EDiste nIkaLLu nIlAlu kArU
nIlAlu kArutE nEjUDalEnU
pAleina kAravE baMgAru tallI
idi EDchE chinnapillalni samudAyistU pADE (anuSRutaMgA nA chinnatanaM nuMchI viMTunna) pATa.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 12, May 2005 1:30:01 PM IST
Hello Friends,
A small correction!
niSSabda kavita anTE chitra paTam !
Posted by: Mr. Vachaspathi V At: 12, May 2005 12:53:48 PM IST
veyiTimgU
Posted by: ★Vinåyåkåm★ chitt♥♥r At: 8, May 2005 12:25:53 PM IST
Saastri gaaruu namoennama@h komchem Opika paTTamDi baalugaaritoe paaDiddaam
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 7, May 2005 10:49:59 PM IST
SarmagArU! pATa adbhutaM !
mEmu vinAlE!! ellA??
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 7, May 2005 0:05:38 AM IST
Saleem gaaruu, I agree with you. Actually I can fit my thaughts only in poems first. Then I will try to put them in song form. May be that is the reason. However, I will try may be in future.
Posted by: Mr. Kameswara Sarma Sriadibhatla At: 6, May 2005 11:40:10 PM IST
Sarma gaaru,
It would have been really looked better, if you havent used kasi visa mesa visa visa. These repeteitive sounds or words, dominating the song, and its losing its beauty. I have read your songs, most of them are dominated like this. I feel the songs looked more beautiful, if they had been just plain. May be the your wonderful padyam writing skills, are getting carried over to songs too.
Just my opinion :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 6, May 2005 11:34:34 PM IST
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