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General Forum: Poetry | | kavitala pai vastunna vimarSalu nirmANAtmakaMgA vuMTunnAyA? | |
| Posted by: Mrs. Anupama K At: 11, Nov 2006 11:32:01 PM IST
kavisArvabhowma SrInAdhuDu sinimA chAlAmamdiki nachchalEdu amdukanE bAksulu venakki pOyAyi annAru.
adE sinimA nAku nachchiMdi
lOkO bhinnaruchi:
rachanalO pasa lEdani nIku anipiMchavachchu. mari koMdaruku anipiMchadEmO
oka viShayaM
ikkaDa kavitalapei vachchE vimarSalanu nAku telisinamtavaraku O padi SAtaM bAgulEdannArEmO, kAni migilina vALLu bAguMdanE annArugA
amduchEta vimarSalu chEsEvAri iShTAiShTAlabaTTivuMTuMdanukOvAlE gAni adE prAmANikaM anukOnakkaralEdu. asalu prAmANikAniki padya kavitakunnaTTu kolabaddEmannA vumdA? vivariMchaMdi.
kAvAlaMTE okasAri anni kavitala kAmeMTlu chUDu. kavitapei kAmemTlu nAluguMTE I kAmeMTlu chEsinavAri aMtaryuddhaM pEjIlaku pEjIlu. aMdulO pEraDIlu, vyaktigata vimarSalu
I TI.pIlO oka rachana pOsT cheyyaDaM eM ta sulabhamamO, kAmemTlu pOsT cheyyaDamU aMtEsulabhaM
allAkAkuMDA EdeinA patrikalO vachchina rachanalanu vimarSiMchi paMpiMchu. nEnu gamaniMchinavATilO nUTiki reMDO mUDO vEstE goppE. ikkaDa saMpAdakuni aham debbatiMTuMdi. nEnu eMpika chEsi prachuriMchina rachana bAgulEdanaDaM nA eMpikanu tappu paTTaDamE anukOvachchu.
nuvvu sadvimarSana anukonnadi Ayana buTTadAkhalA chEyyavachchu. EM cheyya galavu? ikkaDa kAbaTTi iShTaM vachchinaTlu kAmeMTlu veyyakalugutunnAvu. A patrikalO prachuriMchagalavA? lEdA marO patrikalOneinA prachuristArA? vaTTimATa!
vimarSa cheyyi. adi nI abhiruchi.
kAkapOtE A vimarSa parigaNiMchAlA vaddA anEdi rachayita iShTaM .
koMtamaMdisunnitamanaskulu vuMTAru. allAMTi vAru ghATeina vimarsala valla maLLI vrAyaDAniki jaMkutAru.
amdukanE rachanalO tamaku bAguMdani tOchinabhAgAnni mechchukuMTU, bAgulEdani tamaku anipiMchiMdAnni sahEtukaMgA eMduku bAgulEdO cheppi ellAvuMTE tamaku bAguMTuMdO vivaristE appuDu I sunnita manaskulu digajAripOkuMDA A sUchanalanu iShTameitE pATistU maroka rachana cheyya vachchu. allA chEsina vAru I veb seiT lOnE vunnAru. vappukunnAru kUDAnu
maroka viShayaM konni rachanalapei asalu vimarSalE lEvu. vATineMduku vadilEsAru?
aMTE avi evarakI nachchalEdA?
aMTE rachanalu kAstOkUstO bAgunnavATinE vimarSiMchArA? allA ayitE A bAgunikUDA mechchukOni idi bAgOlEdu anavachchugadA? AlOchiMchamDi
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 12, Nov 2006 0:38:58 AM IST
http://www.telugupeople.com/discussion/article.asp?id=47885
indulO kaviyitri vraasina kavitalO kavulandaruu chEsina vimarSalu unnaayi. vimarSinchaDam valla vaari Saili maaripOtundani okaranTE alaa Emi maaripOdu ani inkokaru , kavita vraasina vaaru E uddESyam tO aa padam vaaDaarO vachchi cheppEvaraku 42 kaamenTlu.
ee vimaraSalavalla kondaru kavitalu aapEstE , kondaru lekka cheyyakunDaa ardham pardham lEkunDaa lisT penchaDam kOsamE vraastuupOtunnaaru.konta mandi monDi paDDaaru , kontamandi venakki ayyaaru , mari konta mandi chakkagaa vraayaDam telisikooDaa vaadinchalEka maanukunTunnaaru. Edainaa vimarSa anEdi manishi edugudalaki enta avasaram ayinaakooDaa vimarSalO veTa " kaaram " ekkuvaitE aaghuuTki dimma dirigi dirigi sommasillipOtaaDu vimarSaku guraina vyakti. ikkaDa andaruu chepputunnadi idE . sadvimarSa avasaramgaani , vaaLLapaTla tama abhipraayam negiTiv ayitE vaaLLu enta manchigaa vraasinaa ekkuvagaanE spandistuu vimarSistaaru. ivanni gatamlO jariginavE
Saastri gaari vishayamlO Saastri gaaru taTTukOlEka prOfail DileeT chEsEsukOni veLLaaru. maLLii vaarini Ti.pi.kaam vaaLLu kalupukuni pOyaarugaani. enta taTTukOlEkapOtE alaa veLLipOtaarO aalOchinchukOvaalsina vishayam.
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 12, Nov 2006 0:30:04 AM IST
http://www.telugupeople.com/discussion/comments.asp?tc1=47790
"merupupaaTu " pai kavitaku vachchina vimarSalu chuuDanDi. vimarSa kanna hELanE ekkuva undi. idE vidhamgaa inkokaru krindi kavita pOsT chESaaru "kurupu pOTu " ani ilaa vokarikokaru pEraDeelu vraasukunTu pOtE veeTini vimarSalu anTaaraa ?
http://www.telugupeople.com/discussion/article.asp?id=47919
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 11, Nov 2006 11:46:29 PM IST
Posted by: మోహన రాగం At: 11, Nov 2006 11:15:37 PM IST
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baagaa cheppaaranDi.
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 11, Nov 2006 11:27:07 PM IST
:) mari raamuDu aa vimarSani paTTinchukOkunDaa vadileyyalEdugaa. aa vimarSa ki bEs lEdani raamuDiki telusu ayinaa aa vimarSani gauravinchaaDu aayana.
vimarSa chEsina chaakalivaaDu baanE unnaaDu kaanee aa vimarSa moolaMgaa nashTapOyindi, baadhapaDindi raamuDu, seeta, lavakuSulu. kEvalam oka chaakalivaaDu aalOchinchakunDaa chEsina bEs les vimarSa phalitam.
rachanalaki, rachayitalaki, vimarSakulakee andarikee praamaaNikata avasaram vaari vaari paridhilO.
Posted by: మోహన రాగం At: 11, Nov 2006 11:15:37 PM IST
Posted by: Sankar At: 11, Nov 2006 8:59:58 PM IST
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prAmANikAlu vimarSakulaku aMtamukhyaM kAdu
nija jIvitaMlOkUDA idi nijamEmO anipistOMdi nAku
chAkalivADu sItAdEvini vimarSiMchalEdA?.
Posted by: Mr. VIRABHADRA SASTRI KALANADHABHATTA At: 11, Nov 2006 9:14:27 PM IST
Reader VS Writer
1. A writer producing his experience and imagination infront of all the readers simultaneously.
2. Reader may not have that much imagination capacity but possible more experience than a writer.
3. Crtics are invitable and they are the real feed back to a writer for continual improvement.
4. A comment by a reader could expose the strong as well as weak points of a writer.
5. Also possible to identify the motive of the critics or readers feelings.
6. A comment should be constructive and unbiased. This is what we expect but same time are we practicing?
7. Imagination could not be expressed properly or even could not be understood dueto limited words/ improper words used by the writer. Also it is possible the level of the reader not up to the writers level.
Peopele are intrested to know more can refer Write better speak better by RD.
Posted by: Mr. M Kumar N At: 11, Nov 2006 7:22:54 PM IST
Posted by: Sankar At: 11, Nov 2006 1:58:18 AM IST
Sankoo :))) baavundi, baalEdu anTE ibbandi Emundi. baT ee daaram vimarSalu nirmaaNaatmakaMgaa unTunnaayaa ani kadaa. rachana chadivi baavundi, baalEdu ani oorukunTE goDavE unDadu kadaa kaanee aa rachanani khanDa khanDaalu chEsi aa khanDaalni cheelchi chenDaaDitEnE goDavantaa. :p
Posted by: Mrs. Anupama K At: 11, Nov 2006 2:23:26 AM IST
vimarSa vaddani evaroo anaranukunTaanu. kaani aa vimarSa rachanalO lOpaalni etti choopistoo baavunna chOTa prOtsahistoo unDaali. asalu kavita raayaTam kannaa vimarSa cheyyaTaaniki ekkuva arhata kaavaali. endukanTE elaa paDitE alaa chEsE vimarSa valla nashTam tappa laabham unDadu.
sadvimarSa tappulu diddukOvaTaaniki, marinta chakkagaa rachanalu cheyyaTaaniki upayOgapaDutundi. chetta vimarSani ikkaDa andaroo cheppinaTTu paTTinchukOkunDaa vadileyyavachchu. kaanee kottagaa raayaTam modaleTTinavaariki Edi sadvimarSa, Edi chetta annadi artham kaakapOvachchu. alaanTivaari vishayaMlO oka chetta vimarSa vaari mOTivEshan nE debba teesi mari mundaDugu veyyakunDaa cheyyavachchu.
ghanTasaala ni, baalu ni vimarSinchinavaaroo unnaaru, prOtsahinchinavaaroo unnaaru. baalu modaTlO chEsina tappulani sadvimarSinchi tappulu sarididdukunElaa chEsaaru kaabaTTE niladokkukOgaligaarEmO.
Posted by: Mrs. Anupama K At: 11, Nov 2006 6:37:40 AM IST
veree Troo. kaanee eDaa peDaa vimarSistE avi paataaLaaniki sOpaanaalE. :p
Posted by: మోహన రాగం At: 11, Nov 2006 5:28:24 PM IST
pratibhaku vimarSalE vijayasOpaanaalaitE "svaati kiraNam " lO gangaadharam enduku chanipOtaaDu ? atanilO pratibhalEkanaa ? lEka guruvugaari vimarSa vallanaa ?
prOtsahaalu lEkapOtE E pratibha kooDaa raaNinchadu.
Posted by: లొట్టాస్ At: 11, Nov 2006 7:40:04 AM IST
vIraBadraSAstrigAru cheppinadi chAlA sababugA vuMdi
Posted by: Mr. Trivikrama At: 11, Nov 2006 7:32:15 AM IST
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