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Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 14, Mar 2005 1:23:05 PM IST
arae...eruDu maaru poasT ayyidda
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 14, Mar 2005 11:48:04 AM IST
chaeraa gaari vimarSa telipinanduku dhanya vaadaalu. chaeraa gaari vimarSa aedanna pustakamloa pablish ayyindaa? unTae cheppa galaru.
bhaarataanni ikkaDa daiva , karma chintanala dRushTitoa viSleshinchalaedu. oka vaeLa adi tappu ani anTae santoashaparunnae. aSeervadinchanDi ilaanTi tappulu ennoa cheyyalani :)...kshaminchanDi uddaeSyam ayitae sentiments debba teeyaDam kaadu.
ika stree vaada daLita vaada kavitala dwaaraa kottagaa naaSanam chaesaedi aemee laedu. endukanTae annee munupae naaSanam chaeyabaDDavae ! ika kottaga chaestunnadi naaSanam enta horrible gaa undoa cheppaDamae ! sahajangaanae aa varNana marinta vidhwamsa karangaa anipistundi. okkoasaari bharinchalaenanta bhayankarangaa unTundi.
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 14, Mar 2005 11:45:57 AM IST
chaeraa gaari vimarSa telipinanduku dhanya vaadaalu. chaeraa gaari vimarSa aedanna pustakamloa pablish ayyindaa? unTae cheppa galaru.
bhaarataanni ikkaDa daiva , karma chintanala dRushTitoa viSleshinchalaedu. oka vaeLa adi tappu ani anTae santoashaparunnae. aSeervadinchanDi ilaanTi tappulu ennoa cheyyalani :)...kshaminchanDi uddaeSyam ayitae sentiments debba teeyaDam kaadu.
ika stree vaada daLita vaada kavitala dwaaraa kottagaa naaSanam chaesaedi aemee laedu. endukanTae annee munupae naaSanam chaeyabaDDavae ! ika kottaga chaestunnadi naaSanam enta horrible gaa undoa cheppaDamae ! sahajangaanae aa varNana marinta vidhwamsa karangaa anipistundi
Posted by: Mr. Aandhrudu At: 14, Mar 2005 11:44:43 AM IST
teliyaka vyaakhyalu cheyyoddu vaachaspati gaaru mIru jaya anabaDE samskRuta mahA bhaarataanni chadivaaraa? kanIsam kavitraya bhaarataannainaa chadivaaraa?
mahA bhaaratam lO aadiparvamu panchamaaSvaasamu 74 va padyam chuuDanDi.
ka. anapatyu@mDa nai jIvim
china mRuti@mbondinanu nirviSEshamba yiham
bunu baramunu saphalamu gaa
vuna santativaDayu dharmuvuna dharma satI .
dharmangaa santaanaanni pondamani paanDuraaju kuntI dEvini arthistaaDu.
allaagE 76 lO kunti EmanTundO chuuDanDi
ka. bharatakula SrEshTuDavayi
para@mgina nIkEmu dharmapatnulamayi yim
korula manushyula nanta@h ,
karaNambula@m dala@mpa@m bondagaa nOpudumE?
kunti paanDuraajutO palikina palukulu
manassulO kooDaa para purushUlanu talaparani, pondaranI daani taatparyam
Posted by: Mr. HAYAGREEVA MURTY Rachuri At: 14, Mar 2005 11:34:05 AM IST
endukannAnanTE, alAnTi panikimAlina kavitalanabaDE rAtala valla pAlavanTi ADALLa manchi manasullO vishapu chukkalu paDutAyEmO anna benga nAku. antE. adi nA abhiprAyamu mAtramE. ikkaDa evarinI SAsinchaTlEdu, anta dRuSyam kUDA lEdu. evarishTam vAridi, parulanu parula bhAvAlanU noppinchananta varaku. Eva@mnTAru?
Posted by: Bahud♥♥rapu Baatasaari At: 14, Mar 2005 11:09:47 AM IST
gata janmala kadhalu purANAlanunchi puTTinavi. mahAbharatamlOki kotta sandarbhAlu irikinchabaDDAyi...jaya samhitalO pUrva janmala kadhalu unnAyA?!
But...the discussion has taken different direction.
Posted by: Mr. Vachaspathi V At: 14, Mar 2005 11:04:34 AM IST
dhanyavaadaalu moorti gaaru :)!
karNuDi gatajanma maakoo teliyadu. ilaa kavitala valla telusukOgalugutunnaamu kadaa ? maha bhaaratam gurinchi pichchi vaakyaalu nEnu cheyyalEdanDi , adi bhaaskar gaaru chEsaaru , mariyuu aandhruDu gaaru kooDaa ! :)
naakEm teliyadu nannu manninchanDi , nEnu raasindi kooDaa inchuminchu adE ee seks kOsam evaru alaa cheyyalEdu anE ,
baaTasaari gaaru enTanDi meeru , ?
ikkaDa alaanTi pOshTings cheyyoddu anTunnaaru ? Endukani ? anni rakaala kavitalu pOshT chEsE hakku manaki lEdaa ?
alaa ayitE cheppanDi nEnu pOshT cheyyanu :)
Posted by: Ms. akshara At: 14, Mar 2005 10:16:57 AM IST
mUrtigArU, bhalE cheppAru. nEnu mI sphUrtitO samAdhAnam chepdAmanukunnA, A sarikE mIru cheppESAru. kanIsam konni tALAlainA paDunTAyi. ErunA pArunA brahmarshula jananamulu manamu vichArimpadaginaTTivikAvu.
AndhruDu gArU, mIru nAkartham kAranDOy ... oka chOTEmO tikkagA mATlADutAru, inkOchOTEmO chakkagA cheptAru. EnTO mI kata. hi hi hi.
dayachEsi ADAmagA sambandhAnni kinchaparichE paluchanajEsE tokkalO kavitalanabaDE panikimAlina chetta rAtalni ikkaDa vrAyoddu.
Posted by: Bahud♥♥rapu Baatasaari At: 14, Mar 2005 9:49:07 AM IST
Posted by: Saleem At: 14, Mar 2005 3:23:31 AM IST
saleem gaaru ,
seeriyas pOyamgaa teesukunTE kooDaa teesukOvachchu , TaiTil " bandipOTlu " ani
undi , meeru annaTlu feminist poetry ayinaa kooDa naaku saradaa kavita gaa nE undi. ee bhayam vEsindi . anumaanam vEsindi , ardham ayipOyindi, ilaa saagina ee padyamlO naaku raamaayaNam mooDu mukkallO cheppinaTlu ( vachche , koTTe ,techche ) Taip lO undi , saradaagaa undi ani raasaanu , nijamgaa seeriyas gaa teesukOvaalanTE " chEkoori raamaaraavu " gaaru ee kavita meeda saahitya vimarSa chEsaaru daanni ikkaDa pondaparustunnaanu
:)!
saavitri gaaru 18.5.1949 na janminchaaru 4.10.1991 na maraNinchaaru , kavitalu , kathalu , vyaasaalu rachinchaaru .
saavitri gaari kavitalO nirmaaNa vyuhaalu :
vachana padyaanni aTu padyaala tOnuu iTu vachanamtOnuu vEru chEsE bhEdaka
lakshaNam EmiTi ? padyaanikee (gEyaanikee )
akshara sankhyaa krama , parimaaNabaddhamaina nirmaaNam unTundi. ee nirmaaNam dhvani sambandhamainadi. vachana padyaaniki iTlaanTi nirmaaNam unDadu. ee vishayam andaruu oppukunnadE. maamuulu vachanamlO lEni dhvani sambandham kaani nirmaaNam unnaTTu Rujuvu chEstE adi padyam kannaa vachanam kannaa bhinnamavutundi.padyaaniki saampradaayakamgaa vachchina moosa unTundi. (deennE Chandassu anTunnaam ) vachana padyamlO nirmaaNa kramam kavi kalpinchukunnadE. anduvalla pratipadyamlO nirmaaNa kramam kottagaa vetukkOvalsinadE.
ee nirmaaNam kavi aprayatnamgaa nirminchi unDochchu.
ee nirmaaNa kramaanni pradarSinchaDaaniki aandhrajyOti vaara patrika 23.3.1984 naaTi sanchikalO achchayina " bandipOTlu " anE vachana kavitanu gurinchi "chEkoori raamaraavu " gaari saahitya vimarSa :-
rachayatri pEru saavitri. ee rachanalO nirmaaNam kOsam avalambinchina paddatulni "raamaaraavu gaaru " vyuuhaalugaa pErkonTunnaaru . aTlaanTi nirmaaNa vyuuhaalanu pradhaanamgaa mooDinTini gurtinchi vaaTini kramamgaa vivaristuu mundugaa padyam chuuDanDi .
paaTham oppajeppakapOtE
peLLi chEstaanani
pantulu gaarannappuDE
bhayam vEsindi 1.1
aafeesulO naamoguDunnaaDu
avasaramunnaa selavivvaDani
annayya annappuDE
anumaanam vEsindi.2
vaaDikEm mahaaraajani
aaDaamagaa vaaginappuDE
ardhamaipOyindi .3
peLLanTe pedda Sikshani 1.1
moguDanTE sWEchChaa bhakshakuDani 2.1
mEm paalichchi penchina janamlO sagamE
mamalni vibhajinchi paalistOndani 3.1
ee pai padyamlO muuDu vaakyaalunnayi. 1, 1.1 kalipi oka vaakyam.2,2.1 kalipi renDO vaakyam 3, 3.1kalipi mooDO vaakyam. 1.1, 2.1, 3.1 anE vaakyaalu kramamgaa 1,2,3 vaakyaallO kriyalO cheppina ardhaanni vistarinchE vaakyaalu. veeTini kriyaa paripooraka vaakyaalandaam. (Complementary sentences )
asalu vaakyaala nunchi (1,2,3 vaakyaalanunchi ) kriyaa paripooraka vaakya bhaagaalanu ( 1.1, 2.1, 3.1 anEvi ) vEru chEsi ronDO bhaagamgaa koorchaTam ee padyamlO modaTi nirmaaNa vyuuham.
ee padyamlO bhayam vEsindi , anumaanam vEsindi , ardhamai pOyindi anE mooDu kriyalunnaayi . ivi mana: pariNaama suuchaka kriyalu veeTillO bhayam vEsindi anE kriya praadhamika aspashTa sthitini teliyajEstundi. anumaanam vEsindi anE kriya spashTaaspashTa sthitini teliyajEstundi. ardhamaipOyindi anE kriya suspashTa sthitini teliyajEstundi. ee muuDu sthitula krama pariNaama gati ee kriyalanu ennukOTamlO kanipistundi . idi renDO nirmaaNa vyuuham.
renDO bhaagamlO unna 1.1, 2.1 , 3.1 anEvi kriyaa paripooraka vaakya bhaagaalu okadaani kannaa inkOTi kramamgaa peddavi. spashTataadhikyaaniki , vaakyaala poDugu ekkuva kaavaDaaniki saaruupya sambandham kalpinchabaDindi. deennE aikaanisiTee anTaaranee , kavulu deenni vaaDukunTaarani ,
ika mooDO vyuuham.
iTlaa mooDO vyuuhalatO nirmitamaindi ee vachana padya,. bhaashaa Saastra sahaayatatO
ee nirmaNa vyuuhalanu paTTukOvaTam saadhyamayindi.
ivannee rachayitri aalOchinchi chESaaraa ? ani amaayakamgaa evarainaa aDagochchu aalOchinchakunDaa maaTlaaDinaa vaakyamlO padaala paraspara vyaakaraNa sambandhaalu ( karta , karma laanTivi ) eTlaa saripOtunnai ?
aalOchinchi chEsinaa , anaalOchitamgaa koorchinaa ee nirmaaNanni gurtinchagalagaDam mukhyam . gurtincha galigina nirmaaNam unTE adi vaastavikamE avutundi.
bhaashaa nirmaaNaanni vyaakaraNam anTunnaa, nirmaaNa vyuuhalanu vachana padyapu vyaakaraNam andaam. ee vyaakaraNam kooDaa bhaashaa vyaakaraNam laagE amoorta mayindi.
idee ee kavitam meeda vimarSa - paraamaarSa :)!
Posted by: Ms. akshara At: 14, Mar 2005 9:48:03 AM IST
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