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General Forum: Poetry | | niSSabda kavita | |
| Bye Raj & All.
maMchi vishayaalu maaTlaaDaaM ... aMtaa utsaahaM gaa paalgoni vaaLLaki telisina vishayaalu charchiMchaaru...aanaMdaMgaa uMdi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 6:41:16 PM IST
Rest, next time. Nice talking with you all. Bye tc :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 5:28:19 PM IST
Might be kiraN bhay :-) The meaning i gave is presented by Jane Reichhold. I came across these interpretations, when i first explored haikus.
Well isnt it all depends on how one percieves?. As long as reader explore the depths and feel more about it, makes the poetry more beautiful.
Subbu, basic rule is, haiku should present two images, they should describe one event. The two images can be comaprative or contrasting in nature. And there are many varied rules though. 5-7-5 'syllable' rule might be easier for japaneese or english too some extent. In telugu syllables and letters are nothing but same. It almost makes it impossible to write haiku using 5-7-5 letters :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 5:15:19 PM IST
haikUki 5-7-5 niyamaM kaakuMDaa migilina niyamaalEmainaa unnaayaa raaj ? lEka anubhavaanni anubhavaM gaa aMdiMchaDamE haikU lakshyamaa?
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 4:47:41 PM IST
mooDoo okae vishayaanni cheptunnaayi..
enDina kommaa, onTari pakshee, chalikaalapu saayantramu koddikaalamae astitvaanni kalagi unTaayi.. induloa mooDoo okae stitini soochistunnaayi..
alaagae viDavalaeka anagaanae viDavaka tappani stiti..(patanam) soochinchindi..
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 4:42:56 PM IST
i totally agree with kiranjee... great poems will have more than one dimension...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 4:40:58 PM IST
If its just about neeTi boTTu, then i say, those are 'wasted' 3 lines. It shud be about some deeper meaning.
When i was talking about basho, I was trying to anylize his 3 lines strictly on the rules of haiku.
First of all, make a set of rules and analyze if it is ismails lines make haiku or not :-) what makes it haiku? With a general view I got about haiku, I doubt. I feel its more like a mini or chinni or naanee.
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 4:37:25 PM IST
haikUlO digutunnakoddee lOtuluMTaayi kadaa raaj ... udaaharaNa ki ee haikU ni teesukuMdaaM
viDavalEka viDavalEka
viDavalEka neeTiboTTu
chUruni viDichiMdi!
anna ismaayil haikU ni teesukuMdaaM ... ikkaDa cheppabaDiMdi neeTiboTTu guriMchaa lEka manishi praaNaM guriMchaa anna praSna udayiMchaka maanadu...
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 4:26:08 PM IST
aa kasi unTaenae kavita meeda manasu puDutundanDi.. abbae saradaagaa..mimmalni kadilinchaalanae raasaanu.. aemanukoakanDi..
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 4:21:38 PM IST
Akks Nice :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 4:16:48 PM IST
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