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| bhaavaalaitE aMdarivee okaTE uMDochchu gaanee Sree Sree Sabdaala chEta kavaatu chEyiMchaaDu... tirugulEni Sabdaadhipati aayana!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 4:11:48 PM IST
Hello subbu I am good and you? Salaam kiran bhai...kya haal hain aap ka? :-)
well, subbu, Frog is also most famous one. Actually that haiku is read like this:
enDina komma meeda
onTari pakshi ;
chali kaalapu saayantram
first two lines present one image and last line presents one image, and they both explains one event. I am not sure about telugu trnaslation of that, let me give one of english versions of it:
on a bare branch
A crow settels down;
Autumn Dusk!
Dusk and crow, the similie may be color here, trying to explain how early or rushingly the darkness or night comes down in autumn :-). But some schools say haikus should not contain any metaphors or similies. I will try to get, some of opinions of famous poets abt this haiku ! Thank you :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 4:11:44 PM IST
bannee gaaroo !! SreeSree ee yugamu naadani garvamgaa cheppinappuDu..noarettaDaanikevaroo
saahasinchalaedu.. SreenaadhuDoo doorjaTee Saardhoolaalatoa sarkasu chaeyistae, SreeSree kavitalatoa kabaDDee aaDukunnaaDu.. okkasaari poortigaa SreeSree saahityaanni chadavanDi..
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 4:06:32 PM IST
eppuDu modalaiMdO sariggaa teliyadu kaanee ee prakriya 90 llO baagaa praachuryaM poMdiMdanukuMTaa... ippuDu kEvalaM haikUlatO patrikalu kUDaa vastunnaayi.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 3:58:52 PM IST
telugu loa haikoo prakriya eppaTinunDee modalayyindoa kaasta cheppagalaraa !! idi vaedika kaakapoayinaa kutoohalamu koddee ikkaDae aDugutunnaanu..
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 3:52:40 PM IST
google lO haiku ani type cheyyavOy SEKaraM... lakshalakoddee sites vachchipaDataayi...:)
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 3:42:57 PM IST
asalu haikamTE EmiTO kluptamgaa vivarimchaalani manavi
Posted by: Raj Sekhar At: 30, Nov 2004 3:40:29 PM IST
namastE sUryaa gaarU...
meeru vinnadi nijamE kaanee telugulO aa niyamaM paaTiMchaDaM kashTaM... japaan bhaasha lO aitE aa niyamaM uMdi..
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 3:35:07 PM IST
subramaNyam gaaroo !! naenu vinnadi mooDu paadaalaloa varusagaa ayidu, aeDu, ayidu aksharaalatoa haikoo unDaalani.. idi karekTu kaadaa !!
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 3:32:49 PM IST
But raj i think the most famous haiku is "OLD POND"...
paata kolanu
kappa dUkiMdi
neeTi dhvani!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 3:14:01 PM IST
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