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| Hai Raj....How r u?
Let me tell u my opinion...
aa haikU modaTi saari chadavagaanE oka vidhamaina vEdana ki lOnayyaanu... aa haikU bhaavaM kaMTE abhaavaanni ekkuvagaa chitristOMdEmO anipistuMdi... oMTari kaaki,eMDina cheTTu, chalikaalapu saayaMtraM ivannee jeevitaM lOni nothingness ni sUchistunnaayEmO!
What do u say?
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 3:08:12 PM IST
oops sorry It posted twice! Apparantly lost touch with discussion boards :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 3:00:06 PM IST
Lets talk about basho's haiku :-)
how many images are there in that poem? and what are they trying to explain?
I always had this opinion about haiku. It is about how amusingly connected images it presents. Putting aside 5-7-5 rule, the real beauty Haiku is that, those 3 lines presents 2 contrasting or comparative images, independent of each other. But each enriches the meaning of the other and both of them together completes one event.
And the Basho's haiku u quoted is most famous one, and english writers affectionately call it "crow ku".
Now what does a crow on bare tree and an evening of cold represents? what could basho exactly felt in this haiku? any takers? :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 2:58:58 PM IST
Lets talk about basho's haiku :-)
how many images are there in that poem? and what are they trying to explain?
I always had this opinion about haiku. It is about how amusingly connected images it presents. Putting aside 5-7-5 rule, the real beauty Haiku is that, those 3 lines presents 2 contrasting or comparative images, independent of each other. But each enriches the meaning of the other and both of them together completes one event.
And the Basho's haiku u quoted is most famous one, and english writers affectionately call it "crow ku".
Now what does a crow on bare tree and an evening of cold represents? what could basho exactly felt in this haiku? any takers? :-)
Posted by: Saleem At: 30, Nov 2004 2:58:55 PM IST
SreeSree geesina
aggipullala veluguloa
kavitalu chaduvukuni
oahoa, kukkapillaa
ani muddeTTukuni daani
gajjini sabbubillatoa
toami, toami.. migilipoayina
padaala dhaaraalatoa
danDalu kaTTukunae vaariki
seeriyessaa!! ohoa adaemiToa..
andukae gurajaaDannaaDu
oorukoalaeka manavaalloTTi..
vaddulenDi.
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 2:56:41 PM IST
Let us not use this DB for funny poems... We can have another thread for that.But let us have this thread only for serious poems.
Emee teliyanitanaM nuMchi
EdO telustunnatanaM lOki
pravahiMchE pariNaamaM
naa padyaM laaMTi pasitanaM!
---- Sree mukuMda raamaa raavu
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 2:38:29 PM IST
enta cheppinaa vinaka
veLLananToandi
duppaTloa choaTichchi maree
tellaaragaanae saaganampaanu
cheekaTnee, chalinee
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 2:26:23 PM IST
roaDDu
meeda
kaaraaginapuDu kaadu
signalu
naela
raasinapuDu
kaanishTaebuliki dhanalakshmee yoagam
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 30, Nov 2004 2:10:52 PM IST
cheTTu
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aTu aakaaSapu aMchulapaiki
iTu paataaLapu lOtullOki
EkakaalaM lO vistariMchE cheTTu
kavitvaM!
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 30, Nov 2004 1:41:11 PM IST
upadESaM
--------
Uravatala
aarutunna kuMpaTi
boggulannee praardhiMchina meedaTa
nivuru gappina nippu
jeeralEni goMtutO
dheeraMgaa cheppiMdi
chaliMchaka
jvaliMchaMDi!
------- yadukula bhUshaN
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 23, Nov 2004 2:51:11 PM IST
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