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| KaaLeetanaM
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mee koLaayi
gara garaa kasaradu
mohaM chiTliMchukOdu
kOpagiMchukOdu
dhyaanamudralO
okaTE dhaara
nuragalu gira gira tirigE
niMDina biMde ettukOvaDamE
meeku telusu
sagaM niMDina biMde
asalu niMDani biMde
EnaaDU ettukuni uMDaru!
---- tamminEni yadukula bhUshaN
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 23, Nov 2004 1:55:07 PM IST
haikU kavitvaaniki 17 maatrala niyamaM uMdi japaan bhaashalO..kaanee telugulO aa niyamaanni paaTiMchaDaM kashTaM(japaan bhaashalO Ekaakshara padaalu adhikaM).. anubhavaanni anubhavaM gaa aMdiMchaDaM haikU lakshyaM...
udaaharaNa ki kiMdi haikUnE teesukuMdaaM..
3 lain&lU (eMDina cheTTu,oMTari pakshi ,chalikaalapu saayaMtraM) daadaapu okE daSani sUchistaayi... haikU chadivina tarvaata aa anubhUti gaaDataki chakitulaM kaakuMDaa uMDalEmu .. alaa anubhUti ni mUDu lain&lalO paaThakuDilO palikiMchaDamE haikU uddESaM
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 3, Nov 2004 5:48:35 PM IST
subhramaNyam gaaroo ! aDigaanani Emee anukoakanDi, haikoo kavitaki niyamaalaemiTi ?
idi naaku teleekae aDugutunnaanu
Posted by: Mr. ushodayam aslesha At: 3, Nov 2004 5:37:30 PM IST
eMDina cheTTukomma meeda
oMTari pakshi
chali kaalapu saayaMtraM!
--- bashO (haikU kavitvaaniki aadyuDu)
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 3, Nov 2004 5:04:38 PM IST
anni treDs lO laa ikkaDaa maaTalE ekuvayyaayannamaaTa:)
Posted by: Vennela At: 27, Oct 2004 5:52:34 PM IST
saradaagaa raasaanu kiraN jee.... aMdukE pOyeTree sekshan lO pOsTalEdu...:)
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Oct 2004 5:50:15 PM IST
mana ishTaM vachchinaTTu raaseyyaDamE... vEguMTa mOhana prasaad (mO) gaaru telugulO adhivaastavika kavitvaaniki aadyuDu
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Oct 2004 5:39:14 PM IST
aiDiyaalu annee naavE akkaa...:) evari padaalU vaaDukOlEdu...
idi adhivaastavika kavita kiraN jee... flO akkaralEdu...:) surrealistic poem.
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Oct 2004 5:33:06 PM IST
monnE raasaanakkaa... ikkaDE modaTisaari pOsTaanu....
goppa kavitaa! adaMtaa mee abhimaanaM... :)
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Oct 2004 5:09:21 PM IST
ayyO aMta seen lEdu akkaa.... nannu EDipistunnaaraa? nEnoppukOnu... :(
Posted by: Subrahmanyam Mula At: 27, Oct 2004 4:57:29 PM IST
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