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General Forum: Literature | | I padyamu yekkaDidO cheppukOnDi | |
| Posted by: Miss rajeswari rajeswarinedunuri At: 2, May 2009 7:53:31 PM IST
namaskAram rAjESwarigArU!
mI padyamu "vijaya vilAsamu" dwitIyASwAsamulOnidi. arjuna, chitrAngadala vivAhasandarBamulO vadhUvarula madhyanunna tera yettinapuDu chitrAngada, arjununi chUchina vainamu.
Posted by: Mr. SATYANARAYANA PISKA At: 4, May 2009 5:11:54 AM IST
# oka niyamam paddhatee unnaaka vaaTini kaadanaTam dharmam kaadu. chandhassu, alamkaaraala niyamaalaki viruddhamgaa maaTlaaDaTam sababu kaadu. praasa niyamam laedu anaechoaTa paaTimchanakkaralaedu. ekkaDaa yati niyamamlaedu ani chooDaTam jaragadu. avi paaTimchalaenapuDu padyaalu manaesi, naaneelu, haikoolu chaduvukuni samtRupti paDaalsi raavochchu. ee dhaaram valana chakkani abhipraayaalatoa, aasaktikaramgaa saagae charchalu emtoa vij~naanaanni pamchipeDutunnaayi
Posted by: Mr. Surya Pudipeddi At: 3, May 2009 9:21:19 AM IST
chilakalakolki kan$goniye@m jErala@m golva@mga rAni kannulun
molakame~ruMgu neelamula muddulu gA~ru noyAri meesamul
galakala navvu chakkani mogaMbu, veDaMda yuraMbu , siMgamun
galachu ruvANapuMgavunu galgina yAkuruveera puMgavun
Posted by: Miss rajeswari rajeswarinedunuri At: 2, May 2009 7:53:31 PM IST
Posted by: sivanagini vardhineni At: 2, May 2009 10:18:58 AM IST
evarinee bAdha peTTE abhiprAyamoo, abhinivESamoo nAku lEvu kanaka, ee TApikku meeda nEninka rAyanu.
A modaTi vAkyaM tappa, vardhinEni rAsina vanniTinee nEnu oppukunTAnu.
mari kumudammulu okasAri moosukupOyi, maLLee vikasinchEdAkA ochchindi, vATi gODu nevaroo paTTinchukOrEM?
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 2, May 2009 6:41:56 PM IST
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 2, May 2009 8:22:21 AM IST
raamakRushNa gaaru chaalaa baadhaakaraM gaa vraastunnaaru.padyaalu rasahInaMgaa unnaa, choukabaarugaa unnaa sarE gaNaadulu saripOtE chaalu ani evaranukuMTunnaTlu vaarikanipistOMdi? pratibha E samasyanainaa saadhiMchukOgaladu.
aggipeTTe lOna naruvadi pullalu
bIrakaaya dharayu perige baaga
koMga niMgilOna kulukuchu nunnadi
evaru mukhya maMtri? yevarikeruka!
ee padyaM ChaMdassu reetyaa sarvalakshaNa saMpUrNaM! deenni OhO ani evarU anaru.lakshaNaalaku ateetamaina oka "jIvanaaDi" (idi anirvachanIyaM.nijamaina kavitaaMSanu hRudayaaniki maatramE chUpiMchagala Sakti) uMTE adi padyarUpaMlOnE uMDanakkaralEdu.E prakriyalO unnaa aa jeevaM,javaM daanikuMTuMdi.padya saadhananu oka tapassugaa saagistE evarainaa vaSyavaakku loutaaru.vaariki E niyamamU eMtamaatramU aDDaMki kaadu.aMdarU niyamaalanu maatramE paTTukoni vrElaaDutU "sogasulanu" alakshyaM chEstunnaaru anE bhaavaM peMchukOkaMDi.Savaaniki enni alaMkaaraalu peTTinaa eMta nishprayOjanamO - spaMdiMpajEsE bhaavaM lEnapuDu padyaM kEvalaM lakshaNayuktaMgaa unnaa prayOjanaM uMDadu.Eka kaalaMlO lakshaNamU, bhaavasoundaryamU pOshiMpabaDaTaM goppavishayaM.aa sannivESaalanu kaaMkshiMchaTaM atyaaSaYO.nEramO kaadanukuMTaanu.ika ee yati charchanu vadali Seershika vaipu chUddaaM!
Posted by: sivanagini vardhineni At: 2, May 2009 10:18:58 AM IST
Posted by: sivanagini vardhineni At: 2, May 2009 7:16:57 AM IST
sonta padyAlalO yati pATinchaTaM kEvalaM paDE akshintalanu sAdhyamainanta varakoo tagginchukOvaTAnikE!
ee madhya renDu mooDu padyAlalO yati konni chOTla tappindi. VAree, veeree soochanala mEraku sarididdEppaTiki, modaTi sogasu konta tagginaTTu nAkanipinchindi.
gaNakramaM paTTi oka nirNeetamaina padyamavutundi. A taravAta prAsA, yatulu koddO goppO shOku chEstAyi. kAnee ivi kaneesapu avasarAlu. ivi pATistE padyamoo, kAkapOtE kAdoo anTunnAru. anTE mATala koorpoo, mATala virupoo, vibhaktuloo, vyAkaraNamoo, alankArAloo, chamatkArAloo ivi unnA, lEkapOyinA, padyamenta rasaheenaMgA, chavakabArugA unnA, (1)-gaNAlu saripOyi, (2)-yati, (3)-prAsa unTE chAlanukunTunnaTTu nAkanipistOndi. okavELa adi oppukunnappaTikee, 1, 2, 3-laku ichchE mArkulu 34, 33, 33 kAvu. nannaDigitE 80,15, 5 anTAnu, chAlA udArabuddhitO!
intakee 'kumudammula' padyaM gurinchi evaroo paTTinchukunnaTTu lEdu!
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 2, May 2009 8:22:21 AM IST
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 1, May 2009 10:08:11 PM IST
yati guriMchi raamakRushNagaariki konni balamaina abhipraayaalunnaayi.adi chaalaasaarlu prasPuTamoutOMdi.adi vaari ishTaM.sinimaallO vilan ku oka gaaTu uMDaTaM tappanisari kaakapOvachchunEmO gaanI padyaaniki yati maatraM tappani sari.mEmu yati paaTiMchaM aMTE adi vaari abhimataM.aadikavi nannaya nuMchi ee naaTi navya "padya kavi" varakU yatini paaTistUnE unnaaru.adi padyaaniki sogasunu kaligiMchaTaM maatramE kaadu, padyaanni dhaaraNa chEsE saMdarbhaMlO oka pradhaana saMkEtaM outuMdi. iMta cheptunnaaru raamakRushNagaaru appuDappuDu vraastunna tama soMta padyaallO maatraM yatini paaTiMchaTaM lEdaa?
Posted by: sivanagini vardhineni At: 2, May 2009 7:16:57 AM IST
poortigA tikamaka paDi pOyAnu.
bhamiDipATigAri padyamu tikkana mahAbhAratArambhaM lOnidi.
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 1, May 2009 10:18:52 PM IST
Posted by: sivanagini vardhineni At: 1, May 2009 6:49:13 PM IST
cheppintarvAta j~nApakam vachchindi, idi pan~tulugAri padyamani.
vardhinEni kAmenTlu 90% oppukunTAnu.
kanda padyaM teesukuni, pAda vibhajana choopinchakunDA rAstE, kondariki adi kanda padyamani teliyaka pOvachchu. kondariki telustundi. chaduvutunTE, dAnilOni oka laya, oka gati, leela gAnO, prasphuTaMgAnO, kanapaDutundi. alAgani anniTilOnoo kanapaDadu. pAda vibhajana unnappuDu kooDA, adi kanda padyamani telisinappaTikee, okaTiki renDu, mooDu sArlu chaduvukunTE gAni teliyani sandarbhAlu unTAyi. konta mATala virupulO unTundi. prati nAlugu mAtrala daggarA mATa virigitE, idi chAlA sulabhaM. Aru mAtrala daggara viriginA sulabhamE. konni udAharaNalu ivvaTAniki prayatnistAnu.
SreerAmuni dayachEtanu ......................... 6+6
lEmA! danujula geluvaga ...................... 4+4+4
A mandiDi yataDarigina ......................... (2+4)+6
akkaraku rAni chuTTamu ........................... (5+3)+4
aTuvEpu udAharaNa iddAmanTE Emee tOchaTaM lEdu.
golusukaTTugA rAsinappaTikee adi kanda padyamani enduku telustundi? dAnilOni gaNAla koorpunu baTTi, ja-gaNAniki sambandhinchina niyamAnni baTTi, 2-4 pAdAntaMlO gurutwAnni baTTi, koddigA (bahu koddigA mAtramE) prAsanu baTTi. yati ikkaDa EmAtramoo panichEyadu. (idi andaroo oppukOkapOvachchu). kanaka, kanda padyAniki kandatwAnni abbinchE prayatnaMlO yatiki nooTilO okapAlO antakanTE takkuvO sthAnaM unTundi.
ayitE, yati unnanduvalana oka sogasu kalagavachchu. venakaTi sinimAlalO gaLLa lungee, SAnDO baneenoo, duDDu karrA, bAreDu meesamoo unTE veeDu vilan` ani telisEdi. A taravAta vADi mohAniki oka gATu unTE, adi oka kosamerupu, tappani sari kAdu.
injaneeringulOnoo, mAthamATiksulOnoo necessary, sufficient, desirable conditions anna vibhajana unTundi. nA mataM - yati desirable mAtramEnani.
taruNi nananya kAnta - anna padyaM mooDO pAdaMlO yarige-hankRutitO, nAlugO pAdaMlO sphuraNa-bhOmaNi - ikkaDa yati elA pATimpabaDDadO chappuna teliyaTallEdE! alAgE, Sree yana-chittamu, drAyita-rambagu - kooDA. ikkaDa yati enduku kudirindO cheppachchu, kAni A vivaraNa elA unTundi? EdO mArumoola roolu kOT` chEsinaTTunTundi.
yati akkarlEdanaTamoo, ja-gaNAniki sambandhinchina niyamAnni ullaghinchaTamoo okaTi kAdu. A renDodi chEstE, dAni dumpa tegi, adi kanda kAkunDA pOtundi!
kanTha SOsha, kArpal` Tanal` kAnksha tappitE kAbOyEdEmee kanipinchadu.
pOtE siddhikin` - lOni ka-tO
kumudammulu vikasinchen`
gamalammulayandu dagu vikAsamu laDagen`
dami hechche bAntha satulaku
gramamuna janduruDu velugagA nantantan`
panilO pani, ee padyaM evaridai unTundO ges` chEyanDi. oka ayidu gessulu vachchAka, nEnu cheptAnu. adi ee Seershika niyamOllanghana kAvachchu. ayitE Em pOyindi? A apapratha nAkintaku mundE ochchindi kadA! (ninDA muNigAnu, ....)
Posted by: Mr. Ramakrishna Pillalamarri At: 1, May 2009 10:08:11 PM IST
nEnu padyaM pOsT chEsE lOpulO raajESvari gaari padyaM pOsT ayiMdi. sarE - aapadyaM manucharitralOnidi.pravaruDu varUdhinini tiraskariMchi veLLaaka varUdhini virahavEdananu varNiMchE saMdarBhaMlO peddana gaaru sUryaastamayaaniki kathaasaMdarbhaanni an~vayistU cheppinadi
Posted by: Mr. narasimham bhamidipati At: 1, May 2009 10:07:50 PM IST
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