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Idoka Inspiration by Sunkara Bhaskarrao, Andhra Bhoomi, Sep, Monthly.

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Subbarao, Medicine chaduvuthunnadu, Andam, dabbu pushkalam ga vunna Su. ki vunna oke sarada, preminchatam. Mundu oka ammayini premisthadu, aa ammayi bagundi anipinchinappudu daralanga ameki boledanni vagdhanalu chesthadu. Athani prema Cinema lu, shikarlu, restaurents lo thintalu, kaburlu cheppukovataniki parimitham. Aa preminchinammayitho varam rojulu thiragagane aamelo evo lopalu kanipisthayi, Tharuvatha ame bagoledani pisthundi. Appudu ameni preminchatam manesthadu, evo abaddalu cheppi ame thanani kalise prayathnam manukonela cesthadu. Ante aardam, maro ammyi kanipinchi ame premalo paddadani. Kabatti, subbarao ammayilni valesi pattadam lonu, vaddanukonnappudu vadilinchu kovatam lonu number one anochchu. Evarni ee matalu cheppi boltha kottinchavachcho Sub ki thelisi nanthaga marevvariki theliyadu Subbarao premagrantham pejilu perigipothunayi, okko pejilo okko ammayi thongichusi tholagi pothunna transission period lo oka rojuna Su. nijamga premincha dagina ammayi oka kottha pagelo adugu pettindi. Appudu Su. medicine final yr lo vunnadu. Delhi nunchi transfer ayi vachchina IAS officer kuthuru Vimonisha. Andaniki andam anthaku minchi thelivi thetalu Vimo. sontham. Ame medical college lo adugu pettina maru roju, Sub. personal PC lo Vimonisha tho romance file open kavatam jarigindi. Kani Vimo. Su patha Cliopatra la lantidi kadu. Blind love bird kane kadu. Emanishi nayina kshanalalo appude market loki vachcina hot hot thriller la chadivesthundi. Anduke SU. ni Hidden Bin Laden lanti karaku drukkulatho chala thorough ga parikshisthu vundi. Kastha avakasam dorikithe chalu Su. ni Karod pathi prasnalatho testulu chesthune vundi. Aa roju tank band meeda jana samcharaniki duranga koorchoni vundaga ''Inthavaraku evarni premincha leda? ' navvuthune Su. ni prasninchindi. Subbarao VImonisha soundharyaswadhana maththulonchi okka kick tho bayatiki gentiveyabaddadu. Irakatam lo pette prasna, Vimo smart thinking ki machchu thunaka. Ollu daggara pettukoni samadhanam ivvali, alochishtunnadu speed ga. Su. ' NO, Yes', annadu. Adapillatho saradaga thiragadam preminchadam anukonte, Yes. ..... Girl friends tho thiragadam preminchadam ela avuthundi anukonte na answer NO! annadu Subbarao. Nee thelivithealu nadaggira chupinchaku Subrav anukondi, VImo., Sub. nijam cheppadam ledanna kasitho. ' Ante nuvvu ammayillni trap cheyyakundane vallu ne ventapadi neetho freega thirigarantav? Ala ani nannu namma mantav? Manam vundi India lona, leka Newyork city culture lona?', Vimo cros examination prarambhinchindi. Vimonisha tho frank ga vundali, leka pothe thanaki dhuramayi pothundi, ee alochanatho bhayapaddadu Su. ' Ofcource! ni sandeham sahajame, ILU ... ILU andam tho preminchadam ayipothunda? Prema anedi mansulo madhurabhavana ga moggathodagali, puvvula puttali, chandanam la parimalinchali. Athi manoharam ga ee bhavanni andamaina padalatho abhivyakthikarincharu sinare garu. 'Matladani mogga madiri nadichira! nissabdam eruganatti nimnaga vale nadachi po!' antu. Prema raka poka antha sukumaram. Anunithyam jeevithamantha akraminchukoni vundi anukshanam ahladamaina challadanam andinchali. Saradaga ammayilatho thiragadam antha prema anipinchukoda' annadu Subba rao poetic touch isthu. Subrav gaadilo paduthunnadu, mood lo kochi dachukonna nijalanni cheppesthadu. dochukonna premanantha kakkesthadu. Matash ayipothadu anukondi Vimonisha. ' Ante .... adapillatho saradaga thiragadam kosam vallani premisthuunnamani abaddalu cheppaka thappadantav? premichaka poyina parvaledu kani premisthuunnanammi ninnu ani nammabalikeyalantav! love peru tho abaddalu cheppeyalantav, that means valla jeevithalato prema peru tho adukovachchhunantav, anduke ala adukontunnav, am I right? cheppu subrav?' vachche kopanni nokki petti Vimo., Subba rao ni cool ga namili chapparincha sagindi. Sub. kangaru paddadu. Vimonisha speed lo vundi. Ame manasulo anumana beejalu natukontunnayi. Ame drusti lo thanu vilon la mari potunnadu. Sub chala badha paddadu. kangaru paddaadu. thanaparuvuki jaruguthunnadi, leda jarauga bothunnadi damage. Dani nundi athma rakshana chesukovali. ela? Subrav ki ardham kaledu thakshanam. Alochisthunnadu, alochinchadu, flash la vachchindoka alochana. Vimonisha! neeku theluso theliyado gani nenu chala nijayathi ga vyavaharisthunnanu, edi dayakunda anni nijale chebthunnanu, okka abaddahm kuda inthavaraku neeku cheppaledu, cheppanu koodaa, enduko thelusa? Vimo. subrav ne chadavasagindi. sub okka nimusham aagi malli cheppasagadu. 'Vimonisha! endukante.... I love U. I love u vimonisha! premaki mundu manam okari nokaram ardham chesi kovali chakkaga, leka pothe mana prema premature baby ayipothundi. Now let me tell u facts ... only facts. Nenu adapillalatho thiriganu nijame, kani adi pure friendship. leda avi avagahana kosam only contact meets ani anukovali. As a matter of fact, nenu evarni mosam cheyyaledu. Because I have my own norms and my own principle. ante nenu vallalo evarni preminchaledu, it's some thing like dating. Nenu chala frank ga chebthunnanu Vimo! nannu nammu, nenu ninnu mathrame premisthunnanu, ninnu mathrame preminchagalanu. Nuvvu naku dakkina sare, naku andaka poyina sare. I love u Vimo nannu nammu' annadu subbarao, desperate ga vundi aa tone. Subrav ki Vimo. nachchindi, baga nachchindi. ameni su. premisthuunnadu, nijam gane. Preminchani samayam lo premisthunnanani Sub. abaddam cheppinapudu aa ammayilantha nijamani nammeru, kani Vimo ni nijamga preminchi I love u ani entha arichi gee pedthunna ame nammatam ledu. avi maya matalu antundi. Vimo andam adbutham, ame alochana vidhanamloni churukudanam Udhrutham. Ameloni aathmiyatha paripoornam. Sub ni anthagaa aakarshiinchinavi ive, anduke sub lo ame pai thapana ekkuvayyindi. Kani Vimo manassu lo natina anumana visha bhindhuvu inthinthai vatudinthai annatluga perigi ame manasuni kalushitham chesthundi. Ame manasulo sub. meeda asahyanni marintha penchuthundi. 'Subbarav! nee matalu nenu nammalenu. Adapillala tho thiriganu kani preminchaleduntunnavu. Na valla vallake nastam jaragaledantunnavu, nijam marokatani nenenduku anuko kudadu? Prema peru tho okarini mosamu cehsinavadiki ala endarinayina mosam chese thelivithetalu pushkalamga vuntayi. Subrav nammakaniki vunna viluva neekemi thelusu? Amayakurallayina ammayilaki aasala swargam chupi nammakadroham cheyagaligina nee theginpe nee avalkshanalaki certificate. kadana galava?' andi Vimonisha laser knife lanti matalatho. Visuruga vella boyindi kani Sub. matalu ameni kadalaneeyakunda aapeyi. 'Vimo.! velthanante ninnu aape sakthi evariki vundadu. Ayithe velle mundu oka mata vini vellu, it's my humble request' annadu , brathimale dhoranilo. emitai vuntunda idi ? anukuni, anyway adedo interesting ga vundochchu anokoni calm ga Sub. prakkane kurchundi. Subrav moham lo tension kani pisthundi, Vimo lo no reaction. 'Istam ekkada ela erpaduthundo chepalemu, ayithe chalasarlu modata erpadina istam chivari varaku kona sagadu. Na vishayam lo kuda ade jarigindi. Modata nenu preminchina ammayi meeda nakunna istam karigipovatanniki karanam...... Ame na nunchi thana avasaralaki na dabbu ni aasinchindi thappa nannu preminchaledu. Pelli chesikondamani nadaggara prasthavana theesuku raaka poyina parvaledu, before marriage manam entha enjoy chesina thappuledani nannu rechchakottadaniki prayathninchindi. Naa kantu konni siddanthalunnayi, naku kaboye bharya samajam kattubatlani datakudadu. Nijayathi kolpokudadu anduke ameni kaadannanu. Migatha vari vishayam lo kuda ilantive mari konni. Nenu samajam angikarinchaleni ibbandulu. Vallatho jeevitham panchukolenani ani pinchindi. Anduke vallani kadannanu' ani aagadu Sub. 'Oka vishayam chepthanu nijayithiga, kani nuvvu nammavu, ayina vishayam neeku cheppakunda vundalenu' ani malli aagadu subbarao. Emita vishayam ani asakthiga eduruchudasagindi Vimonisha. 'Vimonisha! na manssu pai oka psychological impression padindi. Ekkada, eppudu ela ani cheppalenu. Naku rajakeeyanayakula vupanyasala meeda vichithramaina alochanalu vacchevi. Mana nayakulu adi chesthamu idi chesthamu ani vagdhanalu chestharu. ayithe aa vagdhanalu kevalam vagdhanalu gane vundi pothayi. Thama prayojanalu sadhinchadam kosam nayakule abddalane asrayisthunnappudu daanini manamu follow ayithe thappemiti? Ee alochana chalakalam na manssulo naligi naligi chivaraki vallanu follow avatam thappukadu anipinchindi. Ala naku idoka inspiration ayindi. Ee nayakula ee adarsa prabhavam tho ammayila sneham sampadinchataniki konni abaddalanu asrayinchanu, pelli chesikondamani vallatho vagdhanalu chesenu. Ivi mana nayakula vagdhanala vantive. Ayina veeti valla vallaki keedu jarugaledu, eduti variki keedu cheyani abaddalani manam white polish antamu, thellani abddalu, navi alntive. Nenu preminchalani prayathninchanu, naku thagarani chethulu kadukkonnanu. Ayithe mukhyamga e amayiki navalla etuvanti chedu jaraga ledu' ani aagedu subarao. Aa matalaki ascharya poyindi Vimonisha. Ameki Subrav matallo modatisariga nijayithi kanipinchindi. ' Preama ante emiti annadi nee sanathyam lone naku ardhamayyindi. Nijayithiga chebthunnanu. nuvvante nakistam, nee roopam na kistam. nee matalu nakistam. neetho kurchovatam, matladatam, chivariki nannu niladeesi adagadam.. . idantha nakistam. Neeku alane anipisthene manamiddaram okatavudam. Alochinchi nemmediga cheppu Vimo. ' antunna Subbarao kallu chemarchayi. Iddaru kanneellu dachukonnaru. ************************************************************ Okarojuna bedroom lo relax ga vunna Dr. Subbarao ki coffee isthu ' mee patha prema partners eppudayina , akkadayina kanipinchara doctor?' ani Nimonisha navvuthu adigindi. Dr.Subbarao coffee thaguthune kasiga 'ada caselu chusedi thamarega doctro? varini edo oka rojuna thamare kani petti nannu pilisthe andaram kalsi saradaga coffee thragudam' annadu dhuma dhuma laduthuu. -----------the end----------------------- story chadivina tharuvatha, I want to share it with my friends in TP, and a few doubts also, 1, If Subbarao, Vimonisha place lo vunte ee pelli jarigeda? 2. jarigithe vallintha happy ga vundevara? 3. ee prema vivaham success r failure?

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